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Reviewer: Lumberpanda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2024 7:51 AM Title: The mistake

Really enjoyed that last chapter! Becoming food or rather part of a dish and cooked (and surviving the ordeal!) is hot! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Had a lot of fun writing it :) 

Reviewer: BabyZoe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2024 2:06 PM Title: The car ride

I just discovered the story. Bring a tongue ring is an incredible thought, at the whim of a young woman's powerful tongue and mouth. Great writing skills!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2024 5:25 PM Title: The mistake

Glad your back to writing, I enjoyed this. Still hoping for more smoothing. Especially when the people using Levi are unaware.



Author's Response:

Get ready for a new level of smoothing this next chapter :)

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2024 5:16 PM Title: ShrinkCon Part 1!

Interesting.  I love that Levi got swallowed again. I wonder if while at the tiniest restraint if they will eat more tinies.



Author's Response:

Great! Maybe :)

Reviewer: allwaysman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2024 11:53 AM Title: ShrinkCon Part 1!

A long wait but another great chapter, I'm hoping not such a wait next time but it's a great story! Please keep going



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: GtsN Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2024 6:49 AM Title: The mistake

The story was very good in the first chapters, but the further it is going, it feels like ideas are just being recycled. It honestly got me to just skip parts, because i already kind of knew what was going to happen. It kind of feels like that holiday has been going on for months. 

This part is just my personal taste/opinion and can be ignored :)// i really hope Levi gets a nice ending. i have nothing against domination i like it even, but the story is turning into just cruelty for him even if he's beginning to like it. The story is evolving into something where i cannot imagine he'll grow back ever, even if he does he's going to be completely broken. And if that happens, how is he going to face his family? Logically he'd not be able to look at them properly, besides most likely looking like a soulless human being by then. I'd be cool to see some kind of revenge actually, something where she'll understand what she did to him. 

But you write your story and whatever you have in mind! I'm just some random guy on the internet!



Author's Response:

Hi guy from the internet! 

Thank you for your honest review. I can see where you are coming from, it is one of the reasons it took so long for me to write a new chapter. 

But I had fun writing it these past couple of days and I plan to disrupt their holiday, so it should pick up soon :) 

Let me know if you have any suggestions! 

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2024 5:15 AM Title: ShrinkCon Part 1!

Excited to see what is so special about the panties. Hoping Levi gets some time with her butt.



Author's Response:

Who knows? :) 

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2024 4:22 AM Title: ShrinkCon Part 1!

Happy to see this continued! Another amazing chapter. Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Tso9234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2023 9:33 AM Title: The mistake

One of my all time favourite stories so far. Just perfect. 

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: allwaysman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2023 10:26 PM Title: A sticky situation!

Just brilliant! This nipple piercing part is another great part in this incredible story. Can't wait to read some more



Author's Response:

Thank you! In another week or so I'll finish the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2023 1:45 PM Title: The mistake

Glad your writing again, one of my favorite authors. Love the unaware scenarios and the smoothing is the perfect vessel for that type of content. Hope to see some more feet related content. Smoothed into nail polish maybe?



Author's Response:

Thank you!! He'll definitely go on her nails :) 

Reviewer: Mad57Ms Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2023 10:35 AM Title: A sticky situation!

Love the Smoothing update! Hope to see more of it!

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2023 1:32 PM Title: Update!

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: MostlyRed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2023 4:50 AM Title: The mistake

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2023 8:16 PM Title: Update!

Really happy to see you back with a new chapter. I really enjoyed it. Seeing the start of him starting to enjoy and accept the shrinking was fun, and at some point, I'd love for him to just admit he enjoys it, and that's when she grows him back, knowing she can shrink him again whenever.


The smoothing idea is really fun, and I would be so happy to see her smooth him to a buttplug or anal bead and use it, as I'd love to see some more anal play in the story. 


But I'll enjoy it no matter what you do. Excellent chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I agree he's starting to get some enjoyment out of being her toy :) 

Reviewer: Perspec33 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2023 12:28 PM Title: The mistake

A+++ writing 

You're a creative artist and a cunning intelligence, and  I appreciate you sharing your work with us!



Author's Response:

Wow thank you for your kind words!! 

Reviewer: allwaysman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2023 3:54 PM Title: Update!

Great having another chapter been waiting for this, excellent again great story can't wait for more please keep this going



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Inari The Floof Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2023 1:05 AM Title: The mistake

Poor Levi! As much as I love these stories I just feel bad for the protagonist and want them to have the happy ending they deserve, if they deserve it of course, and poor Levi definitely deserves it

Author's Response:

Lol, indeed :) If you have any ideas about that let me know!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2023 11:35 PM Title: Update!

Nice. And with the food mention there is a good chance Levi will be smoothed to food and eaten by an unaware Claire. Hope so.



Author's Response: Hi! Thanks. He will definitely be smoothed to food at some point :)

Reviewer: mirmo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2023 8:00 PM Title: Update!

This update is just awesome ! Very very good idea ! Great story



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you like it :)

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