Reviews For Ill-Gotten Gains
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Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2022 11:32 PM Title: The Goblin and the Grog

I wonder if Kor will reach a breaking point, either stop responding/reacting to anything or giving simple answers when addressed and obediently do whatever task the girls demand of him. If he does turn over a new leaf, being either polite and obedient or mute and unresponsive/boring, will it even matter to Mynna and Mirabelle? Afterall if they start acting too kind towards him they'll no longer be able to see him at all or possibly forget about him entirely due to the 3rd curse.



Author's Response:

I hope not! I've got more planned for Mynna, Mirabelle, More, and their wizardly pursuer... It would be very inconvenient for me if they all just decided to be reasonable and sensible about this whole affair!

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2021 4:30 AM Title: The Tower and the Box, Meanwhile...

Quite an intriguing story.  What will Mynna do with Kor?  What will the Mage do with Mynna and Kor?  I like the time play between the characters, though it seems only Mynna is current.  Oh the little sack tied up inside the box with Kor inside is terrific.

Very interested as to how this story unfolds.

So far, very well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading! I look forward to exploring those scenarios among many others, I hope you'll find it enjoyable!

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2021 4:25 AM Title: The Tower and the Box, Meanwhile...

Great story so far, always nice to see more fantasy related stories.

I'm liking the foot stuff so far, hope we can see more.

Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I plan on introducing several other fantasy-themed characters in the story, I hope you'll find them as enjoyable as this first chapter!

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