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Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2022 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 22 DA chapter 36 a-b

Appreciate the updated information with the height specifics for both the men and women.  It helps to really elaborate on the sheer size difference between the sexes.  Curious where you'll go from here with the overall arc of the story, now that there's a news story about the family and the women's growing condition out there for the world to read.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your input. I haven't figured out a way to upload renders, because I usually render 4 scenes to a chapter. 1: Dan and Val in the morning. 2: Dana and Matt as the get ready for online classes. 3: Bill and Donna before they get set up for their classes, and 4: Final scene with everyone in the kitchen. I have a DeviantArt page under GentleGiantGTS that has all my renders. If not, drop me an email at Thomaswood239@yahoo.com and I will send some of the renders from the story.

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2022 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 20 DA chapter 35

Curious if the growth rate will either stay the same or pick up the pace in this story, given Dan's concerns about the house being big enough for the women to live comfortably for the foreseeable future.

If it's not a minor inconvenience, perhaps have a scene in each chapter where the men measure the women (or the women measure themselves) in order to keep track of their heights throughout the story, so that the reader has a better sense of the growing size disparity between the women and their male counterparts.

Otherwise, amusing stuff overall and hope to see more.

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2022 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 17 DA chapter 32

Touching family reunion at the end.  Looking forward to more interaction between the women (especially Val) and the men as the size difference grows.  Enjoyable read overall.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the kind words!

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2022 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 DA Chapter 29

Nice little dream scene you slipped in there.  Good stuff all around.  Curious as to the exact heights of the ladies by this point, and when they'll crest over 8 feet in height, assuming you'll have them surpassing that in the coming chapters.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

At this point in the story, Valerie is 7’10”, and Dana is an inch shorter 7’9”. When Bill has his away game, Valerie will hit 8’, Dana 7’11”, and Donna will be 7’. Thank you for your interest in the story, and the kind words. It has been really fun to write!

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2022 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

The story is getting awesome, but please make the side effect for moms much more than girls, I wish to see they become so huge and sexy in each family, at least double size and much sexier than daughters!

Thank you so much!! 



Author's Response:

Sorry, but for this story, I have a specific size in mind for both the mother and daughter. If you go to my DA page (gentlegiant1970), I did a render of a possible future with a smaller Dan sitting on the lap of a much bigger, and pregnant, Valerie. But I am so grateful that you like the story!



Author's Response:

Sorry, but for this story, I have a specific size in mind for both the mother and daughter. If you go to my DA page (gentlegiant1970), I did a render of a possible future with a smaller Dan sitting on the lap of a much bigger, and pregnant, Valerie. But I am so grateful that you like the story!

Reviewer: G Man Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2022 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

You mad genius! That ending to the last chapter was Great!! Im happy both Dana and Bill are finding success in their love lives(I love that you named Dana's friend Matt Murdock!) I'm also excited to see what happens next with Dan and Valerie!

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I wanted to make sure that Matt Murdock had a girlfriend that didn't try to kill him!

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2022 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 DA chapters 17-18

Very nice, growing moms are awesome, moms should grow much bigger and hotter than daughters ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: suce57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2022 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice update 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2022 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Glad to see this story continuing.  Hope you'll keep it going.  Wondering if this will turn into a sort of 'New World Order' kind of story, assuming a large percentage of women end up getting this vaccine.  Anyways, good stuff so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I don’t plan on taking this into a New World Order direction. I currently have a James Bond story going that is heading in that direction.

Reviewer: G Man Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2022 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi! Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying your story and I'm a bit excited to see what's in store for Bill and his new friend😉 I'm also happy to see you using Matt Murdock being used positively 😄👍🏾👍🏾 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I wasn’t going to include any female other than Bill’s mom and sister as being affected, but the opportunity to include a potential love interest also being affected was too good to pass up.

Reviewer: suce57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2022 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love the husband wife theme. Great start and Looking forward to the next chapters 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I tried to make this as gentle as possible, with both mom and daughter being affected, but staying true to the character.

Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2022 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 Chapters 6-12 on DA

Very nice, I wish the mom in the family become the biggest, much bigger and hotter than girls ;)



Author's Response:

It would be interesting, as I haven't made a final decision. The story is kind of writing itself, and I hope you enjoy the journey!

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2022 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story!



Author's Response:

Thank you. It has been really fun to write, as I have been trying to explore subtle interactions between mom and daughter with other people, as well as the son with his mom and sister, plus maybe others as well.

Reviewer: Jim1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2021 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting to see how this story develops, especially if the mother and daughter keep up their rates of growth.  Hope you'll keep this story going.



Author's Response:

It has been a fun write so far. I just have to work out details if I do continue the story, as it would involve an entirely new house and car and clothes. But I am really glad you like it so far!

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