[Report This]Date: December 23 2022 10:28 PM Title: Big Man On Campus
No new chapters until someone can successfully name all 4 prophets guys ;p
Glad this story held up to my memories on re-read. There’s still so many things I’d like to find out.
Happy Holidays, dzlkidd.
Date: November 10 2022 10:06 AM Title: You Again
Would you please return to writing this series!?
I really want this story to continue!
[Report This]Date: August 07 2022 6:21 PM Title: You Again
Just reread this part. Making Roxanne someone from his past, someone who’s younger and once had a school girl crush on him when they were kids, is a stroke of genius. Truly hope you continue this story. Especially if it means more interaction and perhaps something even more between T-Rod and Zanny. They’re certainy my favorite two in this story.
[Report This]Date: August 02 2022 4:06 PM Title: Big Man On Campus
This is my favourite story on this site bar none. Can't wait to see how this ends up but I'm still praying for many more chapters before that point.
Date: June 07 2022 11:04 PM Title: You Again
How lucky can Theo get? Apparently luckiest guy in that universe. At least he only lives in letters, or I'd be seriously jealous. I'll be honest I did not expect Roxy to be the childhood crush, thought it would be more of an explanation why the protagonist is into tall women. Of course this ties in very nicely, but writing stories that are too tied in runs the risk of being predictable. After all, not everything happens for a reason, or has a straightforward flow. Also, I do not know what kind of timeframe you have in mind, the first 15 chapters were a very rich (and appreciated) introduction. However I feel the story will need to pick up the pace soon. Unless you plan on writing 100 chapters+ which, of course, would be more than welcome.
Your effort and consistency seems underappreciated, so big ups, not many here can match it. Hopefully you'll be back soon, but not too soon to be burnt out.
Author's Response: Yeah, my characters are like, way chatty. I do want to get into more action in the next bit. I’m sure there will be more sexual contact, but not as much as most of theses stories do. I can only say that BG’s will GB, Roxanne won’t be the biggest we run into, and Theo will see that darker side of big girls.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2022 11:47 AM Title: Roxanne
Boy is Roxanne scary. I’m lovin it. Wonder if Pee Wee can tame that beast lol
Date: May 31 2022 8:43 AM Title: Roxanne
Roxanne is here and god she is a dickhead.
One thing that Imediately stuck out to me is that Roxy may be a lil bit dumb.
Theo knows her name which could mean alot of things
1. He's been stalking her and the other girls
2. Proof that he actually lives there
Maybe because she's so infamous she thinks that's reason for him to know her but the fact she never questions how the fuck he knows her name or the name of other residents in the apartment is dumb on her part.
She also seems to label him a perv immediately, the way this chick treats strangers who hadn't done anything to her is wild,(Maybe she assumes that Theo is a perv because he's human in atlasia).
Also for someone so stoic as her I would've assumed she would have a deeper more mature voice.
One final note is that she can clearly feel guilty since she states that she shouldn't of grabbed theo(Funny that she laments doing that when she'sbeen unruly during the entire interaction her failing to address that behaviour while mentioning grabbing inadvetly suggests that she thinks all of her other actions are justified in this interaction.)
Author's Response:
Let’s just say she’s a bit hostile…. And there is a history here that Theo is not privy to.
Date: May 24 2022 1:46 AM Title: Big Man On Campus
Hey! So, I ended up making a Google presentation as a visual aid for some of the size differences in this story. I tried sharing something like this a little earlier, but the review section doesn't seem capable of supporting .png files. Sorry if this ended up spamming you.
Of course, you shouldn't have to sign in to a google account to view them. In the unlikely scenario that anyone else happens to be on the slides at the same time, you will appear as "anonymous frog" or something, assuming you're not signed in. This is a burner email for me, so don't expect me to be on the slides either unless I end up modifying or adding characters.
Here is the shareable link:
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1wivMNwOv7GkPjBroYrpxSQyOBgmskIRKjvhzaXaYfDM/edit?usp=sharing
So, hope this helps! The character appearances aren't going to be exact, but I think they're at least close. If I end up being completely wrong on something, please let me know. Or just your thoughts in general, would love to hear. See ya!
Author's Response:
Nice reference. I’d Say Diane’s taller, with a whole lot more muscle, Roxanne’s not that size yet…. I had another character that size who may show up soon, though.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2022 12:30 AM Title: The Sweetheart
Woohoo! New chapter! Well, here we go... shamelessly stealing this quote-and-reaction style... :D
"They would give each other a head nod in acknowledgement of their mutual shortness, then move on."
Like their own kind of 'awkward white people smile' lol. I love this detail for some reason.
"Theo would later wonder how the hell he had the audacity to step right toward the four or five hundred pound local boy and egg him on."
Yeah, seriously, me too? I respect the moxie, I really, really do.... but good lord, man, do be more careful! Besides Gen (who is leaving soon), Camille, and Luc, you haven't exactly made friends of these other Atlasians. Even again today with Sara. Not a great idea to be making enemies, yeah? Hopefully he'll let it go, or the threat of Gen's revenge will be enough of a deterrent to leave it be.
"Oh yeah. Camille said Roxanne was a "sweetheart" something something. Same meaning but... some colloquial significance maybe?"
Duuude! Duuude no!! Maybe I was reading the 'sweetheart' line from Camille too literally earlier? It could've just been an affectionate term Camille used for her younger roommate, like your grandma would use. Well, that was enough to put some doubt back in my head lol. Their first interaction, where she called him 'pipsqueak', seemed to support @Some giantess fan's theory a bit, but who really knows? Still could be the testiness from the commute. Makes me wonder what she was rooting through her bag for outside of the room for... wouldn't Gen already be there to unlock the door if it had to do with that? I'm curious, even if it just ends up being nothing at all. Something for Gen and Camille?
"I don't have one, just because it feels intrusive, and I don't want people to me on a map with a directory search"
Well, that's terrifying. Another big reason to keep from making enemies. I wonder if Camille will pressure him into using the tracker, for his safety and for her own peace of mind. She did promise his mom she would keep him safe. The health monitor part is sort of cool. Self-implanted, though... how easily could this thing just be removed... by someone else? Someone wishing harm? Yikes.
And then the end where he accidentally sneaks up on Roxanne. It's so tense, I can't take it! Prayers with Theo, again. Super happy with this chapter! Well done.
Edit: Forgot to address Roxanne's height! Jeez, her knee "distinctly' above his head? Her height 'easily' over three times his? 'Kneeling' at 14 feet?!? Of course, none of this is revealing enough for any reliable estimate, especially since kneeling can have so many forms and everybody's proportions are a little different... but somewhere in the 550-650cm range? Wow... good thing Theo didn't look up. Forget the "head taller than Camille" estimate we keep hearing... that higher estimate would put Camille's head at Roxanne's stomach!
Date: May 22 2022 10:42 PM Title: The Sweetheart
So...
This chapter finally officially introduces us to Roxanne!
- Roxanne debut:
Unfortunately, after all the build-up, I personally find her actual debut to be a bit underwhelming. From the title, it was pretty obvious that the "benemoth" Theo ran into at the mailboxes was Roxanne. Also, his reaction to her size was remarkably tame. Roxanne has got to be 20ft+, making her to regular Atlesian collega girls what they are to Atlesian guys. Yet Theo does not even freak out or deduce it is her, even when standing right next to her, until their second meeting.
Personally, I would have just gone for something a bit more EPIC to showcase why everyone is so intiminated by Roxanne. - Roxanne's character:
Although she only spoke one line this whole chapter, a lot can be interpreted from Roxanne's get-up and general demeanor.
As reviewer @titantic theorized, it seems that Roxanne does not like to stand out, wearing those baggy clothes to try (and fail) to keep a low profile. Side-note: judging from what Gen said in chapter chapter 11, I guess they also hide a figure that is even better than Camille's.
Roxanne calling Theo a "pipsqueak" and cursing under her breath seem to imply that she has a bad temper. This seems consistant with Camille's statement of "something... something... BIG, MAD". She is normally a "sweet heart", until she snaps. - Roxanne's past:
With this aforementioned temper and everyone being so avoidant of her, I guess that something must have happened in the past that left the entire collage, except for those who know her personally, terrified of her.
With the prohibition on Atlesian-human relationships, I'm also guessing that Roxanne's family was torn apart.- My theory:
I'm guessing that Roxanne used to go to a human school until her half-breed status was discovered and she was deported to planet Atlesia.
Since Roxanne likely skipped a grade, this means she would have ended up with classmates who were literal giants. I'm guessing that Roxanne used to be bullied, first for being (relatively) tiny and later, after she outgrew her bullies, for being a half-breed. This then continued until Roxanne finally snapped and mauled her bullies so badly that they would be dead if they were regular humans.
- My theory:
- Predictions on Roxanne:
With all the build-up about how dangerous Roxanne is, I'm guessing that she and Theo will end up starting on the wrong foot.
Most likely, with what Theo learned from that waitress, he will make the grave mistake of asking Roxanne if she is a half-breed, which ends up triggering her and force Camille and Gen to step in to calm her down before she mauls him. Still, this incident will cause the two to be on bad terms for a while.
What do you think of my theories and predictions Mr. dzlkidd?
Please leave a response!
Author's Response:
Your theory is way too accurate for my comfort.
I feared building her up too much, but I went with it….
what didn’t make it into this chapter was an introduction to a nemesis of sorts, someone who was much bigger than Roxanne, being a full grown graduate still on the surface. I was doing that to take the heat off, but changed my mind.
the Next chapter is being reworked…. Where you’ll get to see more of the quirkiness that has made her somewhat infamous.
Date: May 22 2022 9:17 PM Title: The Sweetheart
Great story so far, very happy for the frequent updates. The world lore just keeps growing and hopefully so do the girls.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2022 7:51 PM Title: The Sweetheart
A question comes up as to how people such as Roxanne even have relationships. Everything from a simple date, to working together, to intimate acts have to feel like playing with a doll. As for our protagonists, while others have clear fascination with him, it's unclear what Roxanne thinks. He is actually doll sized compared to her.
It's sounding like she is easily 20 feet tall, ten times as big as their own males. She may be conscious, but there has got to be a sense of superiority felt by girls like Roxanne. How does she even get clothes made for her? There has to be a huge societal strain to provide for too many girls her size. And it seems that if girls keep getting bigger, the legal framework may be shifting with it.
Author's Response:
Remember, she’s huge for a young girl, but an adult probably still has her by a foot or so.
the dorms, as a side note to my thinking, we’re built maybe a generation previous, for college age girls, not adults. But both adults and coeds are bigger now, so someone like Roxanne is starting to feel that pinch.,
Date: May 16 2022 8:42 PM Title: Bee Gee Gee Bee
This chapter felt sloppier than the others. The dialogue and actions of the characters were harder to follow.
Such as the part where it says Gen grabs his hand and pulls him closer, then pushes him with her hands on his back. In my head, I can't wrap my head around how they're positioned on couches in order to make this movement.
Otherwise, the dialogue doesn't flow like there are people talking. Scenes like, "That got a big “Ha!” out of her." the usual phrasing is "the waitress let out an exagerrated sigh" and it doesn't need revisions.
I think the main thing that bothers me is the spacing, it all looks very bunched and clumped together. It's probably an error from porting the writing over to the website.
Author's Response:
A sardonic, single “Ha!” is in no way similar to an exaggerated sigh. One signifies you’ve touched on something they can’t wait to tell you about those people, the other is “whatever, I don’t care” and you get a two word answer.
Date: May 16 2022 12:29 PM Title: Bee Gee Gee Bee
"'Big. Girls. Get. Bigger.'"
Didn't think that learning what 'BGGB' stood for would be so satisfying.
Several interesting things were revealed toward the end of this chapter.
- Atlasian males "ain’t all there":
Now that is suspicious! I'm guessing that the experiments that created them also left Atlasian men mentally impaired.
Theo's scores at his former university were mentioned to be mediocre. So it would be pretty funny if he were actually smart by their standards. - Atlasian females get bigger each generation:
That actually makes a lot of sense; evolution does not just end! As for why they evolved this way, I'm guessing it's a combination of the experiments and the fact that they are the ones giving birth, which is a lot easier with relatively small babies. - The attitudes of Atlasian females:
I guess it's only natural for them to consider themselves superior with such a difference in scale. Personally, hope we will get evil girls who abuse their size. - Half-blood Atlesian females are even bigger than pure-bloods:
I'm guessing this is a result of gene imbalance. Also, I think it's pretty obvious that Roxanne is one of these hybrids (more on that later). - Atlesian females are the minority:
I'm guessing that, since they were created by a bunch of white supremacists, females were only ever meant to be baby factories for more males. Or, because of their size, Atlesian females are so fertile that more women just are not needed. - Atlesian females are suppressed:
This was briefly mentioned before, but this chapter gives so much more context!
I'm guessing this is because the government either does not want the human genome altered, as Atlesian genes present an existential threat to the survival of the species, or they are afraid of the rapid evolution of the species, as they could potentially grow out of control (literally)!
Now, with only two days left before the start of the semester, I can sense Roxanne's official introduction coming in the next chapter or the one after that. As I mentioned in point 4, It's pretty obvious that Roxanne is a human-Atlesian hybrid, which will no doubt have major ramifications for her character. I'm still sticking with my theory that Roxanne used to be teased for being (relatively) small, only to end up outgrowing her bullies. However, this revelation can potentially give even more dimensions to her, like: she hates humans because her human parent abandoned her, which she will take out on Theo.
I'm also still hoping that, when Roxanne returns to college, she will be even bigger than what Camille and Gen remember, having entered her second growth spurt.
Finally, with this chapter ending on such a line, "Big. Girls. Get. Bigger", I hope the story's pacing will start picking up when classes finally start, cause I want to see these big girls get even bigger!
(I hope this gets a response from the author!)
Author's Response:
You nailed several points… one thing I would say is, I feel like despite their huge size, Atlasian males would be slightly less aggressive or decisive than men from the core… just as Atlasian women would be at times overconfident or self absorbed. That’s what I was thinking when I wrote that they didn’t seem “all there.”
I think there are small quirks to the Atlasian culture that would cause them to be misread by others, based on their unique sets of issues. One thing I thought about… if every generation of females is bigger than the last, there has to be some concern about resources, mating, or other issues for the future. They certainly thought the size would level off generations ago, but it’s done anything but that. The size gap is becoming more problematic every year.
Date: May 16 2022 10:31 AM Title: Bee Gee Gee Bee
Great world building. Hopefully we get Roxy next chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2022 2:35 AM Title: The Flying Game
@titanic: Love your analysis, man! It's a joy to read.
Just got back from college so I've got a little more downtime than I know what to do with this week before work starts. This story has made that a little easier, so I appreciate it.
If we're sharing our theories about Roxanne, I agree with most of what has been theorized so far. Camille's partially coherent mumblings have helped quite a bit!
With Roxanne being so scholarly and starting her Sophomore year of college at 17 years old, I believe that she might have always been a bit of a wallflower that unfortunately, due to her record-breaking growth, has been thrust into the spotlight and overwhelmed by the unwanted attention and envy from her older college peers. It must be so exhausting to deal with, especially with her being younger than everyone else and separated from her support system - her family - while studying there (on a different planet!).
Camille's defense of Roxanne, while also warning Theo in abundance to be careful around other big girls, leads me to believe that when they get to know each other better she'll be a sweetheart he can fully trust and rely on. That's not to say I think everything will go smoothly, however. She is still young, hormonal, and dealing with quite a lot.
I'm not entirely sure what to make of Roxanne's dislike of Diane yet. It's possible that Roxanne disapproves of Diane's demeanor toward the guys, which would be optimistic, but it could also be because Diane is one of the "competitive bitches" Camille was talking about, and just generally seems like a bit of an asshole.
I'm the most worried about the "on thin ice" line, especially since it comes in conjunction with "pissing us off until we lose control." It makes perfect sense for her to be testy, and I can imagine that after being bombarded with gawking gazes and hushed whispers on the long journey from the spaceport to her apartment, Roxanne would have little patience for a new male roommate with wandering eyes and a tendency to fall on his ass when meeting big girls.
Maybe Theo should ask Camille for Roxanne's number so they could at least text a little to break the ice before she arrives and he is inevitably a trembling, bumbling mess. Perhaps I'm not giving Theo enough credit, but regardless, it seems like a good idea to prepare him a little more at the very least. Can't wait!
[Report This]Date: May 11 2022 1:05 AM Title: The Flying Game
Theo took being tossed a couple stories into the air awfully calmly. He really does trust Camille a lot already. That was a bit presumptuous of Camille to start throwing him like that without any warning or explanation, but it worked out. I wonder if this was the kind of thing she meant about girls being aggressive when they were talking at the restaurant earlier. I interpreted it as malicious, but maybe it’s just playful. Good on Gen for helping him out without messing with him, she’s really changed fast.
“Oh, outside I could get you going up maybe forty feet.” Based on the strength she’s displayed so far, Camille’s really underestimating herself here. I’m not sure whether I feel more jealousy or pity for dudes on Atlasia (that’s a lie, it’s obviously jealousy.)
My prediction is Roxanne is gonna be a genius academically, but maybe a bit of a disaster socially/emotionally. I’m guessing she got into college early, but she's a “square peg in a round hole” and just doesn’t fit in yet. Her body is not at all gonna match her maturity. I have no idea about the "competitive bitches" and "big mad" part though.
Despite seeming pretty great overall, I had a couple doubts about Camille earlier in the story. The threats regarding her sister seemed a bit over the top, and her intent when she chased Theo down was questionable. Now, though? Those doubts are gone, Camille is just fantastic. She really appears to be doing everything with the best of intent.
That raises its own questions, though. Why does she feel the need to give him so many warnings?
- “Because big girls can get aggressive when they want. And you are not going to be able to put up a fight. You’re just not. Not even with weapons”
- “if anyone screws with you, we’re the ones to handle it. If you ever feel unsafe or unsure, call one of us.”
- “I want you to try to be on your toes with all these girls here. And the occasional guy. They can be dangerous to you.”
- “Atlasian guys are terrible at that age. But that's nothing compared to how bad girls get once they get through that first growth spurt.”
- “Seriously, be careful of strange big girls. You kind of worry me.”
- Plus her chasing him down to hammer home the size of the gap between them.
- Plus Diane asking Camille instead of Theo if she could pick him up.
I dunno, it feels like there's a bit of an ominous undercurrent flowing here. That might just be me overthinking things, though. I'm sure there are shitty Atlasians just like there are shitty regular people and maybe that's what Camille is cautious of. However, the part of my brain that has read a bunch of other stories where things are worse than they seem is sending out warning bells all over the place. We'll see.
Overall, this is one of my favorite stories that is getting regular updates. Good work.
Date: May 11 2022 12:43 AM Title: Choices
Here’s the moment of truth, and Camille is…completely reasonable and understanding. I guess her earlier warnings about Gen were thoroughly hyperbolic. That's a relief. Theo comforting Gen after what he just went through was very sweet.
It took Camille less than a day to develop real feelings for Theo and start trying to get in his pants. Maybe a bit on the fast side, but it’ll definitely keep the story moving along at a good clip.
So Atlasians are just really comfortable being physical with other people in general. Again, certainly good for justifying all sorts of scenarios in the story.
“You know I could still just say no, too, right?” “No you couldn’t” She didn’t mean it that way, but damn Camille, could have chosen your words better. It's probably hard to keep in mind how all sorts of things could be misinterpreted given the power disparity.
Theo’s a brave man going in for the kiss, good on him for making the move.
“You come at the queen, you [best] not miss.” Camille’s comin’, yo.
Author's Response:
It’s all in the game.
Date: May 11 2022 12:37 AM Title: The Crush
Straight up laying on top of Theo as he tries to run is pretty damn forceful and beyond just flirting. It’s clear she thinks she’s just being playful, but she still doesn’t understand the power/weight disparity here.
I’m a little confused why Theo thinks he needs to hide in this situation. After “She sat up, pulling him up with her.” I thought they were just sitting next to each other on the couch? Which seems innocent enough. I must be picturing the scenario wrong
Laying right back down on top of Theo, but with even more weight this time, is a questionable decision. Gen just saw that her previous actions already had him shaken up. Seems like they’re both making some poor decisions under pressure.
It’s not really important, but is this trip to university Gen (and maybe Camille’s) first real interaction with normal humans? At least since their growth spurts? It kinda feels like it might be, since Gen clearly doesn’t grasp just how fragile normal people are compared to herself.
I genuinely laughed at Theo’s decision to bail out a window upon discovering Gen in his room. He’s right, Camille was crystal clear that it’s his responsibility to make sure nothing happens. Alas, defeated by a window. And speak of the devil, here’s Camille.
Date: May 11 2022 12:33 AM Title: Proceed with extreme caution
Maybe not the best idea to sit on the big people furniture, Theo.
Another nice little display of control from Gen here, holding him effortlessly against her, like when she picked him up earlier. Still seems pretty unreasonable for Camille to think he should just be able to talk his way out of this sort of thing,
And immediately after, Theo doesn’t help his case at all. He’s already in a precarious position with Gen crushing on him, don’t encourage her by staring at her chest dude!
Gen’s flirtatiousness and Theo’s botched attempts at trying to fix the situation is making for a fun dynamic