Reviews For A Caught Shrinkee
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Reviewer: Acrophite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2023 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this premise! I think it's overdue for me to check out "We Help Each Other Get By"



Author's Response:

Yeah this is an early work, so it's definitely rougher, but a lot of people still like it. Let me know what you think of We Help Each Other Get By!

Reviewer: VelvetSK Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2022 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

 This concept appealed to me because I’m a schizo. You’ve done a great job crafting a fantasy universe where government agents are competent at their jobs. Oh, and also shrinking. If I were Max, I would have screamed racial slurs at Sharon through the microphone and called her a glowie, but that's probably why I'll never have a harem of giant girls.

All the girls were cute in their own way, and I appreciated how they each had distinct personalities while also being open to reader interpretation. Sharon as this no-nonsense young professional. Amy as the NEET. Christie as the low key crazy old flame. Erica as the super girly cooking girl. All of them were cute and delightful. I look forward to reading the more developed story that builds off of this.



Author's Response:

Thanks, the idea was inspired from watching some old harem animes one weekend and thinking "huh, this should have a giantess version" lol. Hey it might not go so terrible for you in this universe, Sharon would put you with an equally schizo giant girl who would expect you to watch for feds while she games. Anyways if you like this one my stories We Help Each Other Get By and One Year Lease are set in pretty similar universes, though the protags in those ones didn't end up with harems.

Reviewer: Aspen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2022 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved the story from beginning to end. The dynamic of the characters were spot on, the humour was nice, and the gentle aspects of the big ladies was actually pretty heartwarming. I loved the fact that they all ended up together, even if poor Amy had to sell her Black Lotus to do help, but it all seems to indicate that they'll have a nice life living together!



Author's Response:

Yeah the implication is that the group has a nice life together and their adventures continue in relative peace with a happy ending. This was one of my earlier stories and the idea is a pretty shameless harem anime ripoff, still it was fun, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Middel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2022 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm happy that in the end he ended up enjoying the new life, it was TOTALLY better than "Growing Day", for fucking sure! They criticized Christie for stepping on him but... well, *holding my hands up* I'm guilty, I loved it! You just hit the point with me, dude!

And I enjoyed the ending when he got the three to stay with him. The beginning was a bit cruel as he was unwillingly taken away from his life perspectives (again, it was nothing so utterly cruel and socially sadistic like "Growing Day"), but the cruelty was very light and the rest of the story TOTALLY made it worth! I wish I was on his place, I'd have resisted far less than him! The only part I didn't like is being called 'something just a little more than a pet'. It's a bit too dehumanizing for my taste and I think that a speech which transmits that idea doesn't exactly fit a gentle story, but considering your other stories (I've read other stories from you on the last days), maybe you're into that "dehumanization" thing. Still, nothing so dehumanizing as "Growing Day" was.

I wish I could give you ten or even twenty stars instead of five but the site only let me give you five stars. I love the girls of this story!



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, a lot of the ideas here carried over to We Help Each Othet Get By, which still has dystopian overtones for shrinkees but at the same time less so than this one, also that story has a way more even relationship than what Max gets here. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Starkadhr Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2022 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

this.... turned very fast in a harem anime...



Author's Response: Getting a harem anime dynamic was kind of the goal for this one.

Reviewer: BlueDream Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 16 2022 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lovely, this one is!

Reviewer: xefron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2022 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Black Lotus?! Seriously?! That alone could cover the cost, and then some. Great story overall.

Author's Response:

Honestly I don't know a ton about Magic, I've just heard tales of how expensive that one is. Still, I figured collectibles and cards would be the only "wealth" Amy was likely to hold. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Waizing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2022 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good 👍!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2022 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

Honestly, I think Sharon should have been the only one that ended up with him in the end. And maybe also Amy, but mostly because she was the most likely to basically let him do whatever he wanted and stay out of his way. She'd basically just be their downstairs neighbor.

Christie has a bit of a disturbing obsession with him, compounded by the cruel streak she showed when she knowingly stepped on him.

Erica was just too much. Patronizing and clingy, she seemed like she more wanted a child than to take in an extremely vulnerable adult man.



Author's Response:

Personally, if in this situation, yeah I'd choose Sharon or Amy, but it's also a harem story. I figured that over time the worst instincts of the various girls would dull in each other's presence.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2022 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok this was a great read!

I loved the worldbuilding and setup for Max before Sharon came.

And I like the interview/solo action each person had.

I was hoping Max would wind up with Sharon, but I personally am thinking she eventually moves in too full time XD

Amy I was like ".....this might not end well" but she wound up being nice and gentle.

Christie too (even though she did step on him) 

And Erica was sweet (if a little patronizing)

Each of them had their own personalities and methods of taking care of Max, that I think will work well together in a group setting. (also I loved their individual sexual play times with Max)

Sharon I do wish had another sexy encounter XD But I can dream. 

A great and long oneshot (any chance of a possible return to this, a follow up or sequel showing them a year later?) 



Author's Response: My intended implication is that Sharon definitely ends up moving in permanently, although she probably travels now and then for her work. I'm not sure if I'll come back to this one, I guess it's not impossible but I've got other stories I'm focusing on.

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