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Reviewer: PleaseStepOnMeDamnit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2023 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch

I wish I was more adept at giving specific feedback but I will just simply say that the story was absolutely phenominal, and it's the level of worldbuilding, storytelling and quality that I hope to emulate with my own writings. The characters, the scenarios, the flow of the story, all great.

This story is probably up there as one of my favorites and I am excited to see more of these characters for a potential sequel.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you enjoy the sequel!

Reviewer: Clocked76 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2023 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 10: Endings and New Beginnings

Please don't stop this story, I want to see this go on forever. Plus we need some anal action maybe anal vore scene between the two love birds



Author's Response:

While I’m afraid this story has reached its conclusion, there may be some butt stuff in store for the sequel!

Reviewer: Milla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2023 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 10: Endings and New Beginnings

Awesome!! I simply loved it!

Like you pointed out to me, I can't see my first review here, but I remember telling you that the story was very good but Katelyn seemed to be just words, telling but not exactly showing. Always winning, always getting, while Finn always had to give, to cede. Well, this changed a lot as the story grew!

You not just put Katelyn actually demonstrating her feeling and words but also put Finn's feelings and thoughts, whatever they were, on the table, showing how he was enjoying Katelyn's love and how it contrasted more and more with the Katelyn he used to know, at the same time showing his disapproval, be it public or just in his thoughts, about many of Katelyn's bad behaviors, including the party queen thing (OK, I loved the lesson she taught to Tina! <3). He started to have a voice in the relationship and Katelyn, despite loving to be always the center of attentions, let him have it.

Also, the development of the situations and dynamics were just brilliant, I must add that! The characters weren't just plain and obvious, for example Katelyn being just an caring ex-bully and Finn being just her boring ex-target and current lover. They reacted differently (sometimes even unexpectedly) in different situations, Finn kept having some hard feelings about Katelyn's past for a while, just fully accepting that she changed after Katelyn, in a bold move of love/reliability, claimed to be the only responsible for the 'growing problem' at the party, saving him from the worst... this didn't just made your characters more believable, it made them natural, it made them human! I felt connected to them! For example, I hated when Finn revealed that Gloria, despite talking again with Katelyn, actually didn't care about her when she was a giantess, and OK, I'm guilty: because of that, I just loved that Katelyn sort of ruined Gloria's party with her meltdown lol. Katelyn's losing nothing by forgetting Gloria. I felt sorry for Finn's past, felt happy that Katelyn was not only trying but actually being different, being better for Finn... I hated Tina but sort of forgave her when she talked better in the last chapter... these sort of connections don't happen when you're dealing with plain characters, those who are just a bunch of descriptions and robotic actions.

And the best surprise: you gave us a hook for a continuation! I don''t know what role Finn and Katelyn will have in the second story or if they'll show in it at all, but I'm already looking in advance to see it!




Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Your first review always stuck with me, especially in the beginning, when writing this story. I’m so glad you enjoyed the journey Finn & Katelyn went on together! As for them appearing in the sequel…they’ll show up eventually! 

Again, thank you for your original feedback and I’m glad to see you enjoyed!

Reviewer: lightwing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2023 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: Endings and New Beginnings

Woo! This was a fun story!  I'm already fond of mean giantesses having guilt and redeeming themselves and wholesome lewd fun and this did them all.  And now we have a sequel hook.  Great job!  I look forward to seeing what you do next with this series.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed! Hoping to expand on the lore hinted at, as well as introduce a bunch more. 

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2023 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 10: Endings and New Beginnings

GREAT story! Hope we get a sequel!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Don’t worry! I’ve already got a sequel in the works!

Reviewer: Greenanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2023 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 10: Endings and New Beginnings

Glad to see everything worked out for our protagonists, gotta wonder what the future holds with other girls going big. I could see Katelyn being used to approach them since her temperament, while not ideal, is at least "nice" by giantess standards. Nice story, congrats on finishing it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Katelyn definitely will be a valuable asset for consulting regarding the future. And maybe Doctor Hopkins will allow some exceptions to her “no growth” rule. 

Reviewer: The-Macromancer Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2023 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 9: Decisions, Decisions

I have my fingers crossed in hopes they eventually get married to top off the romance theme.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2023 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: Decisions, Decisions

Another great chapter.

I love that Finn and Katelyn have made up, and things are looking up for them.

College!? Together :D Nice, it's great that they get to plan their futures like that and that Doctor Hopkins is still on Katelyn's side/cares for her.

Hopefully Katelyn will be able to leave the hangar and resume a normal life (well, normal with the power to become a sexy GTS) 

I hope things keep looking up for the couple (and in Finn's case, getting to look up at Katelyn when she gets big) hopefully she can avoid another 'incident' like the party, and keep her size play just with Finn, or when they are having some fun.

Again you're writing is showing off these characters so well, and I am still captivated by this story and want to know what happens next.

Keep up the great work :D 

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2023 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 8: Facing the Music

This latest chapter makes Finn feel like a total jackass.

Reviewer: Greenanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2023 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 8: Facing the Music

Well with the public getting involved via the news media I'm guessing the "sweep it all under the rug" option is probably out for Katelyn and the good doctor. The real question is what to do with her? Lock her up? Make her join the Suicide Squad? Some kind of power control collar? Anyways I hope Finn and Katelyn manage to fully reconcile regardless of what happens to her, hopefully this doesn't end with her holding him while she climbs the Empire State Building.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2023 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 8: Facing the Music

Have been hoping for an update and this was a nice lengthy follow up.

I personally hope things between Finn and Katelyn don't sour. I love their relationship.

I also hope she doesn't get locked up (or turned into an experiment) or lose her powers.

Her size changing is such a great and fun aspect and when used with Finn it's a great plot device (and sexy plot device XD)

I think she definitely needs to not drink and grow (or if she does, ....not drink so much, and only do it with Finn and her are having some unwinding time with some alcohol) no more GTS party animal mode for Katelyn XD (even though I loved her sticking Tina in her ass crack and Finn in her armpit)

Tina really should learn to not be bitchy queen bee type to a girl who can literally grow and pick her up in one hand....like where is the logic in that.

I hope Tina isn't going to come back to bite them, but something tells me she might be a pain in their asses (....no pun intended). 

Again hope Katelyn and Finn can smooth things over, and Katelyn can keep her freedom. (I'm guessing her powers can't be removed/hoping they can't. So the government people Doctor Hopkins was talking about would probably try and kill Katelyn, lock her up, or try and control her) 

Reviewer: eliwoodx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2022 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 7: Party Queen

I really hope this continues!

Reviewer: Wizalex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2022 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 7: Party Queen

This chapter makes for a really great insight into how Katelyn acted before her growth. She's been playfully demeaning before, but she really embraces her ability to be the biggest personality in the room here.
I really liked her letting loose. She's been cooped up and kept away from everything she used to love for so long, I think it makes total sense that she might go a bit overboard. Sure, it doesn't suggest the healthiest relationship, but growing into changed people is what this story has at its core.
I'm just hoping that the doctor has some news about the risk of additional growth.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next one!

Reviewer: EchoofZen Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2022 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 7: Party Queen

Toxic relationship 101. Kinda makes sense, given how she was an utter shithead beforehand, but I wish it didn't go down this route (and him capitulating instantly because he was told on the phone).

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2022 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 7: Party Queen

Another great chapter here :) 

Glad to see more of this story and it's continuation.

This chapter was wild XD

On one hand Katelyn was having a ton of fun (and definitely loved her putting Tina in her ass crack XD)


I hope Tina takes this as a lesson to not fuck with Katelyn any more.

But on the other hand, she did get a bit out of hand and didn't listen to Finn and humiliated him (whether drunken/without malicious intent or not)

I mean hey, if they were having kinky sexy fun and she put him in her armpit, that's different than doing it in front of a whole party when he is telling her he doesn't want to/wants her to calm down.

I hope they resolve the issue and make up in the next chapter, it seems Katelyn had a realization (and ensuing drunken crying/emotional moment) and will most likely be all apologetic, I hope Finn doesn't go too hard on her, but she still will need to apologize. 

Finn and Katelyn are still perfect together, I do love their relationship as a couple and again it's a great story you've woven between them and their growth together (hehe, not necessarily physical) but emotionally and how they are in love.

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Writing wise you continued to write these characters well and the interaction when Katelyn is big is also continued to be well written, picturing her chugging the keg's of beer, and then getting bigger and just crushing one open with her teeth, etc. 

And the armpit scene XD (as much of an issue as that was for Finn) was also really cool and described well.

Can't wait to read more, and hoping Finn and Katelyn make up over her drunken shenanigans. 

Reviewer: mnirp777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2022 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch

I keep coming back to this story. It's really just so well imagined and written and such a solid concept and narrative. The idea that growing made an alpha-bully-asshole vulnerable was so interesting and completely well done.

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2022 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 6: Morning Make Out

This was such a sweet story.  Personally I'm a sucker for wholesome lewdness, size changing girlfriends, and former villainesses redeeming themselves and this hit all those buttons.  The fact that Katelyn stays nice even after becoming small again shows that she's genuine about turning over a new leaf and her feelings towards Finn.



Author's Response:

Glad you’re enjoying the story! Can’t go wrong with wholesome lewdness!

Reviewer: eliwoodx Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2022 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 5: Status Quo

I never want this story to end. Great writing, amazing characters, and sexy characters!

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2022 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 5: Status Quo

Glad tp know that this story is still going because I really love these characters and would love to see more of them. With maybe a bit more world building since I love the idea of the whole growing thing being a mutation that maybe anyone can get.



Author's Response:

I’ll definitely be thinking about that! Thank you!

Reviewer: Kessler Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2022 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Extending the Olive Branch

Good story, kind of an abrupt ending though. It felt like it was going to go on for a fair bit longer.



Author's Response: I absolutely agree. That ending was too abrupt. I think there’s a bit more to Finn and Katelyn’s story to tell! Thanks for your feedback, Kessler! The story isn’t over yet.

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