I liked seeing Jona knocked down a few pegs.....or all of them, in this chapter.

Daisy standing up for herself and not giving into Jona's shit was a great read. She doesn't server that treatment when she was a loving wife, and mother to his child only for him to run off and whore himself out and abandon his daughter.

I get what Polly said, and do see her POV about Morgan's actions.....but I don't have any sympathy for Jona at all. Especially not when he reacted that way to Polly and was going to hit her.....like dude, what did you think Morgan and Daisy were just going to sit there and watch you slap the shit out of their friend?

It was very karmic to see and experience Jona realize he has no choice, and that his own actions led to the situation he's in now, where Daisy doesn't want anything to do with him and he has no one in his corner.

Morgan I know wouldn't go down the route of lording it over tiny people, etc. I feel Jona was a special case/heat of the moment issue.

I feel (from a purely objective stance) they both were in the right in their arguments (morgan and polly) even though Morgan went the physical route/didn't realize her own strength, she was intervening to stop Polly from being hurt (yes she could have used less forceful means) but she was trying to protect her. 

But from a non objective stance XD I loved Jona getting some great commeupance in this chapter (and Morgan physically grabbing him like that), he was really shown just how little/zero power he has, and it was great and love picturing Morgan just squeezing the air form his lungs, etc. 

Fuck Jona XD 

Was so excited to see a new chapter up :D

Firstly, still in love with Morgan and Lomasi's relationship, they continue to be perfect together.

I'm still unsure of Polly's place in their home, I do like her growth since her pet-days.

On one hand, I don't want her intruding on the romantic relationship of Morgan and Lomasi.

But on the other hand, a strictly 'friends with occasional benefits' situation could work.

I just personally don't want to see her cause any negative impacts on Morgan and Lomasi's relationship long term.

I feel this was another great "wordly" chapter showing more of their friends/social life/world, etc.

I still think Candie is craaaaazy XD But seeing her take down that drunken loud mouth coach was fun, as was seeing her take charge of the game.

But now....shit.....Jona is coming back into Daisy and Rose's lives....and while Rose may be too young/too naive to realize the negatives, I feel really bad for Daisy :( 

But am excited to read more whenever you return to this series. 

I was so happy seeing another update :) Perfect way to start the morning. 

Great work on this chapter, as always it was well written, the dialogue was perfectly in-character for the pre-established ones (Lomasi is as always, a hilarious gremling XD) 

As well as doing a great job on the newly introduced characters, this felt like a real family reunion/birthday gathering.

I loved the introduction of Martha, she seems like a cool relative to have and takes no shit from people (including her bitch daughter) 

It's nice to have another family member in Morgan's corner, as well as the introduction of her twin cousins. They seem like a fun twosome, hopefully *not* keeping Eric against his will.

I laughed when Lomasi jumped up and started making out with Morgan to hide her from her bitch-Karen mother XD The visualization of that was hilarious.

It's also great seeing Gwen doesn't have as much support in her transphobic views as she believed. 

Really enjoyed this chapter, another great expansive one in terms of characters. Can't wait to read more. 

Ok wow, Daisy is having a good time XD

I think it was great Morgan and Lo went on the date with her to help her out, as well as get out themselves. 

Daisy deserves it after her ex-husband's bullshit. 

Also Rose is cute XD 

It was interesting seeing Petra out on a date. 

And Penny sabotaging her dates makes sense (from a character perspective) she is obsessed and fanatical about Petra. 

I know Candie has....issues....but the fact she saw through Penny and warned/threatened her about pulling that kind of shit with Petra's dates shows how much she cares about her sister. (if...enacting it in questionable ways)

Penny needs to realize the truth that Petra doesn't/will never see her like that ( I mean unless she later has a sexual awakening and realizes she's bi/pan/gay, etc)

But even then, I feel she would still see Penny as her pet/emotional support dog, etc. 

There would be too much pre-established intricacies in how Petra sees Penny to ever consider her a girlfriend, etc. 

The visual of Candie holding Penny down with her nails like that was a cool touch, really vividly painting the picture of her and the danger she presents when she goes into her predator mindset. 

OK this chapter was great XD (well every chapter is)

But I loved the next step Morgan and Lomasi have taken, moving in together. It also was a real emotional moment when Lomasi was talking about how Morgan was using funds she'd put aside for her transitioning, and how Morgan comforted her, etc. 

And the teasing and cute moments between them this chapter were adorable, and I loved reading them.

And how Lomasi felt big and in charge when they were in bed, a great look into their growing private-sex life.

It's also great that Morgan is finally willing to go all the way and try going that extra step, it feels realistic and genuine that they have been thinking and talking over this for all this time, and finally she's ready to try penetrative intercourse. (and remembering what happened to Lomasi's sister is a good callback, etc)

Great work on this chapter as always, it was nice to get back to a more Lomasi/Morgan focussed chapter after the previous ones have been more world-building/supporting character focussed. 

Another great chapter to read.

I mean Petra is finally seeing some sense, she needs a wake up call and hopefully this will be her first step in doing so.

Morgan was right (and that line from Petra about the man's wife not having any choice/autonomy really pissed me off) Petra needs to realize how she acts/views the tiny people she has is not good in every sense of the way.

Yes she cares for them, but she doesn't view them as people. 

Glad Penny told her the truth about some of the others in Petra's 'care' don't want to be her pets, can't wait to see how that plays out.

Also more Candie, that was a surprise, I didn't think we'd be getting more of her so soon. 

Lomasi and Morgan continue to be a great couple XD Even when arguing they are flirting, and Lomasi 'comforting' the other vendor operator while simultaneously roasting him. 

Lara riding that drone was hilarious but also cool XD

Gotta say Morgan is taking a huge risk here, hope the enclave appreciates her going out on a limb for them.

It sucks that Morgan has to deal with people like assholes like the security guard at her work place. 

And damn, that guard had noooo idea she was going to wind up tiny XD

I'm glad Petra is being watched and monitored, she needs to be under surveillance.

And Lara pulling a Batman, nice XD

This was another great chapter :)

It was very realistic and palpable, Morgan's anxiety over going to the reunion. Lomasi was great at keeping her grounded. 

I also love Lomasi's reactions to David's jabs at her.

Petra....idk, she seems like a good friend to reconnect with in some senses. But the fact she still has an outdated view on tiny/size mixed people could be an issue.

Like she says she's trying and isn't intentional sizeist, and has Penny. 

But the fact Penny still thinks of her as an 'owner' and Petra is allowing that, the dynamic they have is....questionable. 

I hope Petra, Candie and Penny won't cause any issues, or drama for Lomasi and Morgan :( 

Another great chapter here :D 

I loved seeing more of Lomasi and Morgan being domestic and the airport scenes were great. 

Lomasi is such a little horny goblin, and it's adorable XD

I loved seeing Lomasi's family, her father is great as is her mother and meeting he rsister.

They all seem to have a loving and supportive vibe about them, which is what Morgan needs (besides Lomasi and of course her brother) Lomasi's family welcoming her with open arms and treating her as part of the family is something she really needs.

(especially after the last chapter)

(also Lomasi's dad has no filter XD it's fun seeing Lomasi isn't the only one in the family who is open about sex talk) 


Lomasi and Taz's talk about the sexual aspects of a mixed sized relationship was a great addition, as well as realistic, if someone was as big/or small as they are, there would need to be careful consideration about penetrative sex and safety measures.

Another great chapter here, you continue to do worldbuilding, as well as explore Lomasi and Morgan's relationship beautifully. I cannot wait to read more of this :) 

Yay!! :D I am so happy you decided to continue this story.  

I had re-read the first chapter so many times and when I saw this was updated I jumped in to read it straight away.

I love how you've progressed Morgan and Lomasi's relationship here. The interaction between them throughout this chapter was great, loving and adorable and I loved every second of it. I love their dynamic,

Also working in the two smaller shrinkees at the theatre was a nice touch of expanding their world and showing how smaller shrinkees than Lomasi would have to survive if not having proper homes, etc. 

I am loving Lomasi and Morgan still, their relationship is well written and I again am just wanting more XD

You wrote them both great, and the dialogue and interactions as I said were really written well.

I can't wait to read more of them :D