[Report This]Date: July 28 2022 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Whoa! This was amazing!
Been a while since I read a milf story so it was refreshing to see one on the most recent page.
I really like Kate and Michael’s relationship. They both were interested in each other and once Michael got shrunk, they both decided to enjoy it.
I think it’s great that they didn’t have to worry about what caused him to shrink or how will they grow him. A lot of stories take time to explain it which I find sometimes unnecessary so it was really cool to see you just go straight into the action.
It’s also fun to see Kate as this super horny woman. I love how you described her as a character.
Lastly, the ending was making me wish there was a second chapter. I mean, if there’s multiple tiny people, then we could see Kate play with them too. She could take more risks as well. I think it could also be fun to see Kate hide Michael from Natalie.
If the commissioner ever wants a second chapter, it looks like there’s plenty of fun ideas to try out in the future. I can’t wait for your next story!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the high praise! This really makes my day :D
It's always an honor to provide for people content that they feel is lacking. Both Kate and Michael were fun to write. There is a tangible force that shrunk Michael and other people, but since it wasn't important it was left out since neither Kate nor Michael are immediately concerned with it. And let's be honest, if you are either a super horny milf with the object of your affection vulnerable and in reach or a socially repress tiny that just realized the flirty milf getting you horny is horny for you, do you even care why something as impossible as shrinking happened? lol
I'd also love to do a follow-up to this
Date: July 27 2022 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing! I think this is now my favorite story of yours. I would love to see more chapters of this.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
I realize I must sound like a broken record at this point, but if the commissioner commissions for more, I'd love to explore more of this world lol