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Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2022 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! Loved the detail, and the fact that he screwed himself over by offering to go in his mom's shoe.

Even if this remains as a one-shot commission, thanks for writing it. :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I have a lot of fun bringing people's ideas to life ^^ 

Reviewer: Jay1236527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2022 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely Love this Story! Look forward to reading more, will there be more chapters or a second part? . Would love to see him spend more time In-shoe or maybe even unaware with Shelly. Keep up the good work



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like it! This was a commission, so it's not guaranteed to have a continuation unless the original commissioner decides to pick it back up! 

Reviewer: Ensar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2022 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start, I'm looking forward to the next



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like it! This was a commission, so it's not guaranteed to have a continuation unless the original commissioner decides to pick it back up! 

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