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Reviewer: monstermaker Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

How can you make such a suspenseful plot?!? It combines fear with action and also is very descriptive. Very VERY good. I wouldn't be able tocriticize you, because I've never made a story. But anyway, awesome, cool, the best, going on my favorites!

Reviewer: T-Rex Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 29 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great read. This was the story that made me a Pixis fan. It's so good to see these kind of stories with an actual plot and characters. The airship was cool too.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

* sorry pixis

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2010 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it! I'm off to chapter two.

Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Both of you are doing a great job. I always seemed to like stories with drama between mismatched characters. Reads "very smoothly." I'm interested to see what happens next.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

trouble brewing...
onto chapter 4...

aaron

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