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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 9

damn... this story is awesome. but what i really love are cliffhangers and plots that keep me guessing. well done.
also like the exploding airship...

aaron

ps of course raquel was finaminal as usual.
thanks again for this awesome adventure tale please keep going.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2010 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

Uh-oh! I didn't see that one coming, at all. I wonder if Raquel will be able to catch it in her outstretched arms?

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