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Reviewer: CameronArrow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2026 11:43 PM Title: Charlotte’s Week of Hell

RE: to your response to my last review 


I honestly thought you were gonna have Olivia swallow Charlotte along with his load and that would have been so hot haha 

Reviewer: CameronArrow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2026 10:04 AM Title: Trouble in Paradise

Loved the new chapter and Charlotte's torment. And that vore threat tease makes me definitely want to see Olivia swallow someone now lol



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, vore hasn't typically been one of my kinks, but even so, I have an idea for how I might work it into this story briefly. Possibly toward the end, so hopefully it is worked in well for folks who enjoy it if I figure that out!

Reviewer: smellanon Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2026 3:41 PM Title: Trouble in Paradise

Hi there! I saw your response to my comment about commissions, and I totally get wanting to take it slow, especially as a new writer! If you ever feel up for it, here’s my twitter: @noopydoop. Feel free to hit me up! 


Reviewer: smellanon Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2026 3:23 AM Title: Trouble in Paradise

I really love your story and your psychological writing! Would you be interested in a commission?

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2026 11:16 AM Title: Partners in Crime

Interesting turn of events

Reviewer: Ethicalowner Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2026 1:25 PM Title: Partners in Crime

I’m curious if the next chapter is going to focus on Charlottes perspective? It would be interesting if Olivia got Val to join as well under the belief Char wants it.



Author's Response:

I had to play around with how to approach the next chapter, but did eventually decide that Charlotte's POV felt like a good one to approach it from, so hopefully it doesn't disappoint! And I don't know that Val will get past her distaste for shrinking in this story, but totally hear you on the interesting dynamics of mixing in characters unexpectedly like that sometimes!

Reviewer: blackflashed Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2026 6:21 AM Title: Trouble in Paradise

  • I read your story and it’s really well written, but I didn’t fully understand some parts. I’m pretty excited to talk about it with you. Got a few questions and thoughts to share. Can we connect on Discord? This is my Discord: artisioa

  • Reviewer: smellanon Signed [Report This]
    Date: April 23 2026 4:15 PM Title: Trouble in Paradise

    Hi there! I saw your response to my comment about commissions, and I totally get wanting to take it slow, especially as a new writer! If you ever feel up for it, here’s my twitter: @noopydoop. Feel free to hit me up! 




    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I will definitely keep that in mind and reach out if I reach a point with writing where it feels like a good fit!

    Reviewer: smellanon Signed [Report This]
    Date: April 22 2026 12:19 AM Title: Trouble in Paradise

    Hi there! I saw your response to my comment about commissions, and I totally get wanting to take it slow, especially as a new writer! If you ever feel up for it, here’s my twitter: @noopydoop. Feel free to hit me up! 


    Reviewer: Joun Ross Signed [Report This]
    Date: April 20 2026 9:43 AM Title: Trouble in Paradise

    I really like the depth and emotion your writing has and find it really enjoyable to read and I really like the direction It is going in

    Reviewer: Vyse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: April 17 2026 4:50 PM Title: Olivia Reaches the Promised Land

    Absolutely love this story. So glad you’re writing again. Loved Unintended Receipent. 

    Come on Ethan, embrace your good fortune! Would love to be an ass toy like that. 



    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for your kind words. It's been fun to get into the swing of writing again.

    And I know--sometimes we don't know how good we have it!

    Reviewer: smellanon Signed [Report This]
    Date: April 16 2026 12:39 AM Title: Trouble in Paradise

    I really love your story and your psychological writing! Would you be interested in a commission?



    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the kind words, and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!

    And regarding a commission--I have never written one before, so that is really flattering! Right now, I think I'm still focused on rebuilding my writing and creative muscles, and not quite ready to tackle a project like that (would not want to create something of sub-par quality). But it's definitely something I might be open to in the near/medium-term future, and if/when I'm in a good creative headspace for it, I can definitely follow up with you to see if it's still something of interest!

    Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: April 14 2026 9:03 PM Title: Olivia Reaches the Promised Land

    The plot thickens

    Reviewer: Avenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: April 11 2026 11:37 PM Title: Trouble in Paradise

    As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

    Reviewer: Parksnrec212 Signed [Report This]
    Date: April 09 2026 3:26 PM Title: Cravings

    Another great chapter! Love the mind games she plays with him



    Author's Response:

    So glad you enjoyed it!

    Olivia was born to toy with the lucky men who get to be her playthings.

    Reviewer: Moti0n Signed [Report This]
    Date: April 07 2026 11:48 PM Title: Deepening Mind Games

    I know it’s a personal preference, but giant stuff is gag for me, I skip it 

    Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: April 04 2026 12:53 AM Title: Loose Ends

    He is living my dream x.x

    Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: April 02 2026 9:24 PM Title: Beta Program

    Still looking forward to more X)

    Reviewer: SunGod123 Signed [Report This]
    Date: March 31 2026 5:35 AM Title: Initiation

    I loved this character, can’t wait to see where the story goes from here. Keep up the good work!



    Author's Response:

    Makes me so glad to hear that, thank you! Hope it continues to satisfy.

    Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: March 30 2026 12:51 PM Title: Initiation

    He’s living my dream , I wish I could give up everything to belong to a woman and her ass D:

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