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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2010 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

This is DEFINITELY getting good.

:-D

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

i think i speak for everyone when i say i welcome the fact that its going to be a longer story. this is turning out to be the adventure i hoped that it would be, thanks for posting it.

aaron

ps the vore scene was actually 'necessary' and it flowed nicely but am glad that 'lina's ok aside from being covered in goo.

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