Date: November 17 2011 3:57 PM Title: A Friendly Game
That was good, I haven't read very many but I still liked it.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2011 9:20 PM Title: A Friendly Game
An ok story but can be a bit longer
Date: August 10 2010 1:50 PM Title: A Friendly Game
Awesome evil story!
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment!
Date: August 04 2010 11:39 AM Title: A Friendly Game
You should make an alternate where the game last a little longer. I loved the concept of the game like that.
Author's Response: I liked writing it, but I doubt there'll be anything more to it D: Thanks for review though!
Date: August 04 2010 9:48 AM Title: A Friendly Game
I really liked this story! However one thing: how was Allie shrinking her? I just found it a tad bit confusing but overall I liked the short story. Hopefully there's a second chapter. xD
Author's Response: I figured it was one of those, "She has the power all along but never had a reason to use it til now" kinda things. Though I have noticed a lot of people do like a real, proper explanation, so I'll work on that more. Thanks for your input.