Date: August 19 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such a sad and beautiful ending.
[Report This]Date: September 03 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I really love the ending, it is nostalgically happy. I really like the character development, even if the story is so short, particularly Jade..
Author's Response:
Why thank you
[Report This]Date: May 01 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
this story deserves a better rating
Author's Response:
Why thank you :)
Date: December 27 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
"twas beuty that killed the beast"- a quote from king kong
that was good and well writen.
Author's Response: Why thank you
Date: December 02 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's exactly what I thought reading this story: sad and sweet. I loved it, and i can't get bored with these kinds of love stories. I'm just surprised that she didn't talk a little more with him when she decided it was time to swallow him...
Author's Response: I guess she thought the sooner she did it the less likely she was to change her mind
Date: November 28 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyable story. I love the waiter pun in the first paragraph.
Author's Response: Came up with that halfway through writing it and thought it would be a good informal start to the scene
Made myself laugh a bit as well
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