[Report This]Date: May 13 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 7: Subhuman Condition
You're hitting a homerun! This story is reminencent of the classics by Ziggy and Littlelee and Ogelthorpe. The story is simple, in that it essentially deals with two individuals, yet complex due to your strong descriptions and characterizations. I'm not sure of your ultimate conclusion, but my intuition tells me the brother may not make it out of this alive. I've wondered if the smell of a woman's feet at such a tiny size could "end" someone and could see this being the fate of this now-little brother! No matter what, as an old time fan of these sorts of tales, I appreciate your work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your interest in my stuff, bud. It's flattering to be compared to those guys when I've really just kind of started thinking about this kind of thing a matter of days ago. You obviously like the foot stuff, so I'm betting you already know, from the lead in from chapter 7, that chapter 8 is going to continue in that vein heavily. enjoy!