Date: May 25 2020 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
This was an amazing story with an amazing way to end it. Easily one of the best written stories on this site. The characters, the plot twists, the dialogue all came together in a beautiful way. Thank you
Date: October 20 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Still is one of my favorite stories. With all of the love, drama, twists, chemistry and compassion. Probably a lot more words I could have listed about this story. Now I'm going to reread this story again.
Just thought I should post a review, before I read it. Since it's so amazing.
Date: January 06 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
Beautifully written story. You made the character interactions, dialogue and damn near everything else sound so real.
Phenomenal.
Date: October 01 2012 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great stuff Littlemac. I'm really looking forward to more of your great writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for consistantly reading and reviewing. I really appreciate that.
Date: September 29 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
New here, not new to writing. I must say though, this story was fantastic I will try to read your other stories later, but love them so far.
Date: June 14 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
damn every story u write turn out great. good job
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: May 16 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
damn i dnt want to leave and pull myself away from this one. i especily injoied the fact of how large she was and the fact that she had an "average" size boyfriend KEEP UP THE GOOE WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D
Author's Response:
Thank you, I intend to. I always have tons of ideas, so there will be more stories to come.
Date: August 11 2011 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
As far as I'm concerned, the story is perfect just the way it is. And, I hope Jodi and Hank spend many happy years, together on the island of Kamanawanaleia.
;-)
Date: August 11 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
What a great last chapter. This has been one of my favorite stories to read.
David
Date: August 10 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Really enjoyed this story. I'm not an expert in writing in any way, but this was some of the best I've read in a long time. Awesome job mate!
Date: August 10 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
An apt ending for a very fine story. You very clearly cared about writing a story that was not only technically neat and tidy, but easily readable. What this is is a story first and foremost, and a well-crafted fetishistic fantasy second. That's what I'd call a positive rarity.