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Reviewer: Oceanman06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2020 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 25

This was an amazing story with an amazing way to end it. Easily one of the best written stories on this site. The characters, the plot twists, the dialogue all came together in a beautiful way. Thank you

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 25

Still is one of my favorite stories. With all of the love, drama, twists, chemistry and compassion. Probably a lot more words I could have listed about this story. Now I'm going to reread this story again.

Just thought I should post a review, before I read it. Since it's so amazing.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 25

Beautifully written story. You made the character interactions, dialogue and damn near everything else sound so real.

Phenomenal.

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2012 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great stuff Littlemac. I'm really looking forward to more of your great writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you for consistantly reading and reviewing. I really appreciate that.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

New here, not new to writing. I must say though, this story was fantastic I will try to read your other stories later, but love them so far.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 25

 

damn every story u write turn out great. good job



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: tinyfootlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 25

damn i dnt want to leave and pull myself away from this one. i especily injoied the fact of how large she was and the fact that she had an "average" size boyfriend KEEP UP THE GOOE WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D



Author's Response:

Thank you, I intend to. I always have tons of ideas, so there will be more stories to come.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2011 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 25

As far as I'm concerned, the story is perfect just the way it is. And, I hope Jodi and Hank spend many happy years, together on the island of Kamanawanaleia.

;-)

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 25

What a great last chapter. This has been one of my favorite stories to read.

David

Reviewer: cwmoss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

Really enjoyed this story.  I'm not an expert in writing in any way, but this was some of the best I've read in a long time.  Awesome job mate!

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 25

An apt ending for a very fine story. You very clearly cared about writing a story that was not only technically neat and tidy, but easily readable. What this is is a story first and foremost, and a well-crafted fetishistic fantasy second. That's what I'd call a positive rarity.

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