[Report This]Date: September 13 2011 9:22 AM Title: Dozer dinner
I have just read all 6 parts… My...God! This is wonderful!!! I'm speechless at the story you've composed! Your writing level blows me away completely. You've once again enthralled me entirely! Really, great job!!!
I can offer one more scenario on a vore-restaurant theme: The beautiful girl in the day off decides to do shopping in shopping centre. Before this shopping, she decides to come into restaurant, and eats one guy. Further it is possible to assume, that at the girl very low acidity of gastric juice, and it is possible to live in its stomach 3-4 hours.
It is possible to write as the girl has arrived to shopping centre, as went on different departments, (chose cosmetics, tried on clothes and footwear.) And to describe girl’s sensations, and sensation of the guy in girl’s stomach (in parallel, right after eatings up, during these 3-4 hours.).
/EXCUSE FOR MY BAD ENGLISH/
Author's Response:
Sysprgy57 thank you very much for your review. it was far too kind. it is rare indeed that i get such a complamentry write up. I like you idea of a scenario and may use it in an upcoming chapter. i am already working on another chapter so you idea will have to wait but it was a good idea so may write something similar to it with your permission. Thanks again for the review. i hope you like the next post. Also, Oishi1 has written a few spin off chapters with my permission. you should check them out.
Date: September 06 2011 10:07 AM Title: Dozer dinner
It was great to get more perspective on the employees. I like the fact that they are starting to shape up as believable people with different preferences and feelings about what goes on in the restaurant.