Date: January 31 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
But wait! You've taught us to believe there is no hope for him in this world! What's going to happen? Oh man!
Good stuff. Really interesting mileage you're getting out of these characters. I 'unno. You've layered the stories well. It's a surprisingly textured world, it feels lived in by now, by these two strange people we've come to know pretty well. Now a third! (Ah geez, but who is this strange stranger? What doth this portend for weary Jack?)
Anyway, good writing. Got a lurker outta hiding, if that means anything. Keep on doing whatever it is you do, s'workin', and there are some embarrassingly rapt audience members out here.
Author's Response:
i'm glad you liked it enough to leave a comment, i always enjoy hearing other perspectives
Date: January 31 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
After reading the most recent chapter. I hope Sophie does help Jack.
Dave
Date: January 30 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
Ahhh, I've been anxious to see more of this one, glad you found time to write another chapter. Gotta say, I'm still rooting for some kind of salvation for poor Jack here, and maybe, JUST maybe... he's found it... that or a fate worse than his own sister. :p
Date: January 30 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
Honestly was not expecting that. Great story! Keep up the fantastic work!
Date: January 30 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 15: A New Pair of Hands
Excellent suspensful build up for our tiny hero.
Do go on.