Date: February 10 2018 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
I am so into this! What have you got me hooked on Jacksmith!?
Author's Response:
If this wasn't something you thought you'd be hooked on before reading, then I probably owe you an apology
[Report This]Date: February 10 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
Nice twist. I think it works cuz around that age would be like the chapter. Big over small and would relate to a doll. It's a natural fit should we say, take care of doll but don't know its real. Imo she should have done a different "hiding place" like hide him in her shoes or say unaware in Sophie socks or carlys shoes. Kinda past the "everything gos in the mouth" Altho intresting in being back with carly so soon. Kinda takes Sophie off the hook, leading to maybe sneak prison break out and only place is to hide in footware.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
*picks jaw up off the floor*
holy shit. how, just how, did carly manage to show up at that instant? i almost wonder if she secretly planned this whole thing with here cousins, in an effort to rekindle the fight in him?
either way, if the past 5 years werent bad enough, jack is about to become royally screwed now.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
Another great chapter. Glad to see Carly back in control. I always root for the bad guy (or girl).
Date: February 09 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
No! I was starting to like Chloe!
Date: February 09 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
I love Carly as much as the next guy and this story but at this point your just fucking with the poor guy more than a lion does with a gazelle.
I still look forward to each update though.
Date: February 09 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
Oh dear, Chloe got a little TOO attached there, didn't she? Makes me wonder how many goldfish she might've downed...lol.
And gee, how swell... it's freakin Carly again... Well, on the bright side, at least she saved him from being digested... but on the other hand, he's probably going to wish he was digested after the inevitable excruciating torture that's sure to come after this...
Although I'm hoping to see this story continue on with Sophie... I doubt she's just gonna stop looking.
Keep it up dude, it's been a nice long read so far.