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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail

Wow that was one of the best chapters. But did he send the video to anyone? Because if he hasn't all Carly  has to do is kill him and destroy the video. I hope Jack gets help. But not before Carly tortures and humiliates him in one long session.

Dave

Reviewer: Mars Frog Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail

I'm getting real excited to see how this ends! :) That's definitely an effective cliffhanger you used at the end. 

Another good, inventive chapter overall. Looking forward to what comes next.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail

Wow.  Its amazing that after 5 years of torture, he's kept his sanity almost entirely.  Cant wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail

At first I was thinking Stockholm Syndrome then completely suicidal then I snapped back to how well this worked for the gang Julia was keeping...but bravo good sir you have hit the proverbial home run here.

 

I am hooked now reel me into the boat with the next chapter.

Reviewer: horatio Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail

Wow. I think this is the first time that I'm reading a story here out of pure interest how the protagonist's fate is going to evolve. I'm totally not into all the foot stuff and the chapters 21+22 made me worry that your story stopped to go anywhere.

But this chapter 23 is just plain awesome. I was smiling all the time and got more and more excited to see Jacks plan unfold, absolutely great how you let that build itself up gradually. I surely haven't read every story on this site, but I've been a silent reader for a long time and this is by far the best and most thrilling bit of text that I've seen here. Well, "best" in the sense that it absolutely glued me to the screen, not that it was the biggest turn-on of all ;)

Really, congratulations and a big thank you. I'm baffled and so looking forward to Carly's reaction. Btw, loved your response "i guess that will depend on whether or not carly kills him in the next few seconds ;)" ^^

Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail

Gosh, simply... wow! Can't wait to see her face in the next chapter!! :D

Reviewer: hhhat09 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail

Is he finally gonna be free man?



Author's Response:

i guess that will depend on whether or not carly kills him in the next few seconds ;)

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