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Reviewer: Vorepop Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2018 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Oh my God! What a freaking twist! I can't stop reading!

I have to know! Haha

I love that she loves him! I love there love.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it

Reviewer: Jmeuliere Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Since when does Carly want to seal Jacks little soul inside of her, how has it been going on in her head?



Author's Response:

It developed slowly during the five years she had him in her possession.

Reviewer: Jmeuliere Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Could you write a 1-chapter spin-off of what would have happened in this chapter would Sophie have come in a few hours later? Please that would be great I'm sure it would greatly please and apease a lot of frustrated readers because of Sophie's interrupting nature at the end of the chapter.

Great respect for your writing and your ideas! 



Author's Response:

I've considered writing a what-if story before for this scenario since so many people have asked, but I'm not sure when it would happen.

Reviewer: Jmeuliere Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2016 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Man... This chapter is one of the best of all you've written in my opinion. I am speechless in front of your magnificent story-telling capacities, the way you develop your characters, Carly is one helle of a crazy bitch.

I have a question that is reeeeally bothering me, please answer I would greatly appreciate it; Will one day or another Carly success in performing her "Final Act" she tried in this chapter? It's something I'm ready to pray for to ba able to read one day.

Thank you for your great work, sorry for my distorted english I'm French.

Peace out. 



Author's Response:

I don't like to explain plot points ahead of time because of spoilers, but Jack and Carly will be meeting again one day.

Reviewer: Roeladin Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Okay'this is not what i was expecting.... Brilliant as ever. You are a gifted writer! To bad that Sophie could not wait an hour.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words on this story. It's good to know people are still enjoying this tale long a while after it's been completed.

Reviewer: jojomojo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

I please ask that you that you continue

Author's Response:

very soon

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Epic series so far. It's kind of mind-blowing that Carly isn't the big one in the room for once. The next chapter is going to feel so weird to read. :P

Love your stuff. Your output is humbling!

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

I was wondering when the fact in one of the middle chapters you had jack say that he had alot of time of time to think about how he shrunk and he explained to sophie how the shrinking process worked.

i have been patiently waiting for that nugget to come back into play and finally it has.

I tend to read your stories chapters in large clumps, and this one hasnt disappointed. I like the creativity of your chapters, the jenny character is fantatisc. I enjoy the personality of the carly character. I thought she was just a sadist for awhile but you reallly helped define her more in this story.

You are an excellent author, and a creative writer. I cant wait to see how you finish this off. 

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

I was wondering when the fact in one of the middle chapters you had jack say that he had alot of time of time to think about how he shrunk and he explained to sophie how the shrinking process worked.

i have been patiently waiting for that nugget to come back into play and finally it has.

I tend to read your stories chapters in large clumps, and this one hasnt disappointed. I like the creativity of your chapters, the jenny character is fantatisc. I enjoy the personality of the carly character. I thought she was just a sadist for awhile but you reallly helped define her more in this story.

You are an excellent author, and a creative writer. I cant wait to see how you finish this off. 

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Great chapter. Very hot. But it sucks that when Jack is finally happy it could all be taken away. I cant wait to see what happens next. You are fantastic at cliffhangers.

Dave

Reviewer: kiloxleet Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

wow what a great twist. This is really amazing.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

You are a horrible man jacksmith of 222 Mockingbirg Lane, Langford Illinois.

 

OK silliness aside he finally gains happiness...legit happiness somehow and Sophie FINALLY decides to put 2 and 2 together.  I look forward to see where this latest turn plays out.

 

 

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

how in the hell did sophie get a hold of shrinking potion?  great.  just great. another plot twist.  lol

aw man, i was looking forward to the chapters of jack's new life, and now sophie had to ruin it.  lol  well done JS. 

Reviewer: Mars Frog Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Bitch had it coming. :)

That basically sums up my thoughts, lol. Now Carly can finally see the world the way Jack's tiny eyes have for the past 5 years... and that'll definitely be awesome. Glad it finally happened, and I'm really interested in Carly's fate now, what she'll experience in her shrunken form, how she'll react, etc... There's a LOT to explore there.

And Jack... dear Jack... well, I enjoyed his defiance - it really carried this story. Seems he finally became a "pet" in this chapter... I wonder if he'll become dedicated to Sohpie now, with his altered mental state... or if he'll snap back. Gotta hand it to the guy, five years of hell is long time to hold out with any shred of sanity left in ya skull.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Doesn't anyone lock doors anymore? I knew Sophie was going to fuck this up. I hope Jack convinces Sophie he wants things to be put back the way they were. If it's even possible to regrow Carly. Can't say Im really happy with this turn of events, been following this series from the beginning and finally Carly and Jack are happy together and didn't even last 5 seconds. 

 

Reviewer: Javert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

I'm hoping you flash forward five years and show Carly emotionally and mentally broken just like Jack.

Reviewer: Vord Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

Woah, now that's a twist right there! How is Carly going to adjust?! Things are getting interesting alright.

Reviewer: maurice45 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 30: A New Life Begins

YEAH! Payback Time!

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