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Reviewer: Vorepop Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2018 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 5: Paint the Town Blue

That was super cute! I cant stop reading. 

Reviewer: All Nice On Ice Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 5: Paint the Town Blue

Oh my god. Sir, you have made me giddy with the notion of forced intoxication can be achieved from nail polish. Also the personification of his past, chaste girlfriend in Carly's toe and ensuing high jinks was greatly enjoyed. In a genre where our inspiration comes from the shoulders of giants, you are a collosus among them.

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 5: Paint the Town Blue

Another great chapter.  I got a laugh out of the part of Jake getting high off of the nail polish fumes.  Keep up the awesome work man.



Author's Response:

i'm glad my poor attempt at humor sort of worked, and thanks for the review

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 5: Paint the Town Blue

That was a weird chapter but I liked it. I liked that Carly was actually nice to Jack and didn't punish him when he got sick. Seems to me in some weird way they really do care about each other, Sometimes I wonder what their relationship would be like if Jack some how got back to normal size after all this time. I don't think they would be hating each other as much as they did at the start of the series.

Dave



Author's Response:

i'm pretty sure there's no bro/sis relationship quite as screwed up as this one, hehe ;)

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