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Reviewer: deviant Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 6: Early Morning Jog

this story rocks.  this girl is a total fucking monster.  one would think after 5+ years he would try pity against her.  haha.  this story is bringing me back here.  luckily for me i just kind of buzzed over part 2 so i've got a whole other story yet. :)



Author's Response:

hehe yes i tend to get a little wordy, so the second one is something of a time commitment.  thanks for reading.

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: Early Morning Jog

I love how descriptive you are when describing where Jack is on Carly's body. It really helps the story. Great chapter.

Dave



Author's Response:

thanks!

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