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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 8: Stone Cold Burn

That was a very good chapter. The pain Jack felt wishing he could speak to his parents. Wow that really puts in perspective how cruel Carly has been to her brother.

I really love how nasty Carly is and all the physical and mental tortures she does to Jack. But now I want Jack to get some kind of help. He needs someone on his side.



Author's Response: hang on a couple more chapters, i plan on making jack's existence suck a little bit less

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