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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 11: Best Christmas Present Ever

This was a great chapter. I love how you had Carly acting so sweet to Jack then have her put him through hell in his Christmas gift. Carly is really an amazing character. There are times in this series when I hated her and other times when I thought she was fantastic.

To me she is truly psychotic. But I find my self liking her very much. Thank you for such a great series of stories and thank you for writing such a fantastic character like Carly.

Dave

 

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 11: Best Christmas Present Ever

I love stories that involve the character being trapped in footwear. 

Reviewer: exiguus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 11: Best Christmas Present Ever

Love it.  This is the best story I've read in a long time.



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thanks!

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