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Reviewer: Malaka Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

Yay, another tale in my favorite series! Could this turn into the League's biggest adventure yet? It certainly looks ike it. I can't wait to see if they'll all make it through the trials in one piece.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Just typed 'sir pixis' in yahoo search engine.

This chapter was excellent. Loved the maidens that hop encountered, the descriptions an the whole challenges thing is pretty cool. An I liked the fact that the one human girl is gonna escort them(except hop) to the challenges.
All an all this was a very good chapter an this maybe my favorite league story yet.
My question is since the other leaguers stayed together, will their challenges be together or separately?
Can't wait for more because I'm loving the pace an the sexuallity that is more prevalent in this story than the others.

Aaron
Ps loved the fact that you seem to be describing the ladies feet an toes more.

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story. The other Leaguers will face their challenges separately. You'll see how that works next chapter. As for the feet descriptions, I wouldn't consider myself a foot guy but hanging around this community has given me more appreciation for that part of a lady at least.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

It would seem Hop's test was one of willpower. Specifically; would he let his libido overrule his loyalty to his friends? Great concept, Sir Pix!

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