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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 11

Does this mean that leotards will now become known as jasotards?

Author's Response:

I'm surprised you didn't pick up on the names of the coaching couple... Probus!

Reviewer: scrymgeour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 11

OMG. The last three or four chapters have been so fantastically twisted, I'm reminded now and then, with some of these images, of the first time I read/saw a gts story or picture. (Isn't that what every writer is trying to do, in any genre? get back to that feeling of seeing it all for the first time. Pretty tough to accomplish, but sometimes it clicks.)

Really loving this so far.

scrymgeour



Author's Response:

Thanks... you've summed it up so well. That's so much of what I'm trying to achieve, the feeling of raw yet unjaded sexuality, and the expression of power in a feminine way. Giving these women the feeling that almost anything is possible and almost anything is permissible. But in a playful sort of way, a needful way.

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