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Reviewer: scrymgeour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 20

My Lord. I need a cold shower after this chapter. 

(Also, would you mind if I borrowed this idea, for some story, at some point down the line?)



Author's Response:

I am honored by any and all arousal incited by my works. :) Here is where I'm kind of trying to add a new element into the story. The Goddess of Love doesn't want the State girls to wither and die. She wants them to be humbled and find new love in their humility and smallness.  I am also trying to develop the concept of "emotional shrinking" first outlined in Chapter 18, where the men find themselves adapting to their new sizes by altering their personalities... some becoming playful like a puppy, others becoming brave and flirty explorers of the feminine mountains and canyons... all arriving at a worldview that centers on women in general and their own GTS in particular... and feeling fulfilled... not only coping with their new size and station... but feeling that life is good. As for borrowing the idea, I would absolutely say YES, and would gladly bring it into the Rebalancing series and canon if it fits. I can think of few writers who approach this at such a deep level, as I read the "Library" series.

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