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Date: October 27 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 6 & 7

Let me guess. They're going to be wrestling for State-hood.

;-)

Author's Response:

(Rimshot!) Wait till you see what happens when the girls change their minds... Hint: they end up struggling in a liquid that is not olive oil...

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Date: October 27 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

If I were Jason, I'd reply: "I don't know, Carmen. I don't think a marriage is legal, if you say 'I do' while talking through your ass."

;-)

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Date: October 25 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 4

As in: "Carmen, and make yourself comfortable?"

Sorry; couldn't resist. I will now be serious and admit that things are getting even more...intriguing. Which guarantess that I'll definitely be here for chapter five!

Author's Response:

We appreciate... and Carmen's take on post-rebalancing sex may strike you as topping even Jessica's...

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Date: October 25 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Jessica should be a softball player, if she's a switch hitter.

Author's Response:

One of the side effects in the Rebalancing universe is a tendency for one woman to use her shrunken partner as a means to make love to another. An author named "Max ap" invented the concept in a story set in the universe called "Future Dating." Hecalls the second woman the "assistant."

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Date: October 25 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

For starters? Welcome back! I haven't read a new installment of this now-classic series in a long time. And, you clearly have not lost your touch.

:-)

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Date: October 24 2012 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

So, if Jessica's turn is going to take up all of chapter 3, does this mean we'll see chapter 4 (and Jason) in April?

;-)

Author's Response:

Actually Jessica gets a couple of chapters, then Carmen, THEN April... but you won't have to wait until April to see it.

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Date: October 24 2012 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

On a slightly more serious note? You have the gym-nasty girls tying him up twice! Was that a blooper? Like, maybe, a sentence was accidentally omitted that had him almost breaking free before the freez-frame by the GOL?

Author's Response:

Hmmm... have to check that one...

Reviewer: scrymgeour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another interesting installment. Will follow where this goes.

Again, I have to say that I love all the possibilities this premise offers--comedy, tragedy, requited & unrequited love in a number of differents forms, etc.--depending on the couple, or group of individuals, you choose to concentrate on. (Well, that--and it's also a world where sex never gets boring.)

 



Author's Response:

I think that's the great part about this world... it never gets boring. Thanks for your support, and I hope you'll like what you see in following chapters.

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