Date: April 23 2020 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 Stuck In Your Daughters Shoe
Good
Date: April 23 2020 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 2 Daughters Smelly Feet
Excellent
Date: April 23 2020 1:18 PM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
Excellent
[Report This]Date: March 24 2016 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 Bubble Gum Mommy
sloppy writing, there's an entire change in perspective from the story, killing the whole mood of it
Date: January 17 2014 6:38 PM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
I love your story can u plz make a 4th capter
[Report This]Date: September 11 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 4 Bubble Gum Mommy
Chapters 1-3 are all very solid and fun, but this 4th one is kind of a mess. The subject matter is fine, but the perspective changes from 3rd to 1st without warning, and there are a number of grammatical errors around. In general, too, the characters just feel like they're acting a bit goofy. I know it can sound petty to criticize a fetish story for its believability, but the mother is chastising her daughter while being terrorized beyond belief by her, and it feels a little silly.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 Stuck In Your Daughters Shoe
Solid story.
[Report This]Date: September 09 2013 1:08 PM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
Great story can't wait for next chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2013 5:46 AM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
Nice story, like the feet aspect, how about some worship? Also, would like to see the babysitter come back and play with Morgan!
[Report This]Date: January 29 2013 3:00 AM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
I read this story on writing.com and got to the only ending I could find. Is there only one ending? Or will you take it a different way?
[Report This]Date: January 28 2013 4:53 PM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
Some pretty fun stuff here. There are some bits that can get a bit repetitive (ie a lot of adjectives used in the exact same way within a paragraph) but it's easy to ignore because of the vivid imagery and interactions.
Date: January 25 2013 11:39 PM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
Nice story so far. I am the owner of the story on writing.com, The Shrinking Situation. Its cool that you are posting this here for more to see. If you add more stuff that you haven't written on the interactive, maybe you could post there as well. I can't wait to see whhat you come up with.
Author's Response: I posted a lot of chapters for you lol hope you enjoy!
[Report This]Date: January 25 2013 10:34 PM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
This is my last review for this story since I almost never review a story more than once. I just wanted to say something I forgot to mention in my first review. I like the fact that each chapter is short. You don't need to explain a big, long concept in each chapter but instead, a short one where the reader gets all the satisfaction out of it.
It's what I call "Short, Sweet, and to the Point."
And you get a rating from me, also pretty rare.
Date: January 25 2013 7:10 PM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
Very well written for a first chapter. I'm not going to say for a first start because it apparently is on Writing.Com. Even though the background history is sparse, I don't think you need it at all for a story like this. I'm not usually the person who jumps into the 'meat' of the story, but you do it nicely. I await chapter 2.
Author's Response: I'm the writer from Writing.com so this is my story, just wanna share it with everybody on here. Chapter 2 is coming later tonight!
[Report This]Date: January 25 2013 6:52 PM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
Oh heck yeah i'm going to follow this story. The closest story I can relate to this is 'Parental Myrmidon.' One of the most popular stories on the site. I can tell this is going to be awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks much love chapter 2 will be out later tonight.
Date: January 25 2013 6:45 PM Title: The 2 Inch Tall Mom
This is a story that was written on writing.com called the shrinking situation copy and pasted
Author's Response: I'm the writer from Writing.com so this is my story, just wanna share it with everybody on here. Chapter 2 is coming later tonight!