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Reviewer: Dude Someguy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

I actually made an account here just to comment that this is an incredible story. Your capacity to describe such intense brutality, sadistic pleasure, and the psychology of being helplessly trapped in a position of indefinite torture is so immense that it seems almost effortless, even in situations that stretch reasonable probabilities (she's been shrunken and tortured for long enough to be broken and disheveled, but they just now found her parents? Although I suppose it could be a lie to further twist the knife of submission into her quarry - after all, what can she do? Ask for proof?). Of course, if I was to get hung up on strange coincidences in this fetish's fiction, I'd be hospitalized for the most shameful aneurysm this side of babyfur scat.

I actually have a bit of a personal question however, though I'd understand if you would be unwilling to answer it. Your stories all contain this masterful level of sexualized torture and murder that have a sense of almost "realism" (at least, as far as shrunken people and their sociopathic owners go) beyond that of the usual "giant girl immediately starts calling people bugs and inexplicably getting off to being a goddess" schlockfest. I actually get a little affected by them even long after I've gotten my rocks off, realizing hours later that I found watching a woman be fed her own bodily dirt while being told her parents were gleefully murdered or tortured to death erotic enough to orgasm to (describing it now, it seems so cartoonishly evil!). Is there any sense of post-masturbatory shame that comes to you, or do you just recognize it as part of the fetish for you and as easy to separate from defining yourself as any other personal hobby?

Anyway, I hope I'm not sucking your dick too much. Keep on keeping on, even if I always have to re-evaluate my life while reaching for the tissue paper.

 



Author's Response:

I'm rarely ashamed of who I am and what I think and say and do. For me, writing is a way to make real what I wish was real. While I write, everything I'm describing is really sharp in my imagination and it gets to be real for me, and that's all I want. Probably makes me a sick fuck but it is what it is.

I'm glad you like my work though! I do what I can to make it intense and vivid and I'm glad that's coming through. Thanks so much for the long, thought-out review, and I hope that my further pieces continue to hold up in your eyes.

Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

You have a real knack for torturing little people. I almost feel bad for them. Almost.

 

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

You need help but god damned if I'm going to give it to you.

 

10



Author's Response:

I love that you enable my violent proclivities, Adam.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

That description made it seem far less worse than this was. But it was well written, but man you could write for like the guys that make the hostel or saw movies!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so much! That's a very nice thing to say, I have a lot of love for those flicks. And yeah, my descriptions can be a bit disarming, hehe.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

Fuck thats all I got to say. again Fuck



Author's Response:

Fuckin' a.

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