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Reviewer: supernatural Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2013 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 Pleasure Ms.Fox

Not much for fan fiction but this is good,

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 4 Pleasure Ms.Fox

This chapter was nice.

I like the chemistry building between the two.

And thanks for the cliffhanger, you have to keep your reader hooked some how.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! And yeah cliffhangers are a must haha.

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 3 Foot Rub With A Deal?

Carmelita is hot.
And this story is coming along great.
But hopefully there is more than just feet action.

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