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Reviewer: Chaos Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm loving how the story is going, the level of cruelty is awesome as is the creative ways that our poor shrunken son/brother is suffering. I'm really looking forward to seeing him as a mastubatory aid for his unknowing brother. I'd love to see the micro brother getting up close and personal with Hal's member, the brother not finding his micro sibling until after he's done. Seeing his own brother so puny in front of his giant cock, so helpless convinces him his mom was right and his brother is his to play with. He comes up with the most humiliating punishment of them all, he cock vore the nearly microscopic brother. We never read it but moving him down his cock to his balls seems like the kind of nightmarish hell our protagonist would suffer the most from. He could be left in his sack as Hal informs his family that he's seen the light and where the smallest boy in the house is. I can see them all getting a laugh out of it and congratulating Hal while poor jake squirms in his balls.

I hope you go with that, but whatever you do will no doubt be really good. Can't wait to read more, I hope your upload spree never ends.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter, I wonder if hal will be mad or glad. I hope mad and throws a fit and eventually he ends up shrunken and he becomes a toy to his family as well. I also hope that you make it possible to only grow him to a certain sixe. Both of them should have min and max limits. Please let me know what you think.

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