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Reviewer: nevermore Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2018 7:38 AM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

I read this story a while back,why make it so violent did you hate the character Jake were the whole family hated him,this was a poor story I regret reading it

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2017 11:11 PM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

im not into hate and child abuse thats all it was

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Date: April 23 2014 1:03 AM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

Im looking forward Brooke's ending seriously bad ^^

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Date: August 19 2013 4:31 PM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

To each their own, but I'm not at all a fan of male/male gts interaction. I'm not judging anyone, just giving my opinion. I really appreciate that you're going to give SEVERAL endings. I think I'll be happy with a particular one, hopefully. :) Some folks appearantly didn't grasp that, thinking that this was the final conclusion.  Also, each story has a theme and feel to it. I'm a fan of darker, cruel stories. This entire tale has been fairly dark and ominous and I have to strongly disagree with those that are wishing for a "happy" ending. Nothing about this awesome story has indicated that a happy ending was in the cards. I would kind of find it intrusive and jarring to all of sudden see Jake spared or safed somehow. It's simply unwarranted for this story. Happy endings can be found in other tales. Again, that's just my two cents, once again. :)

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2013 6:28 PM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

Actually i wonder why they want to dispose Jake all or a sudden, in the chapter where Amy invited Tara they where so happy about his undistructabilty so they could torture him again and again and now they want to waste him?

 

If you want to bring the story to an end you could rather bring it to a point where Jake accepts that there is no escape from the hell of his siblings torture or such.

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2013 4:45 PM Title: Unaware vore by Jake's friend

Oh will he survive the tour or will he die forever, be kind of funny if he survive since Sky will have very interesting Ideas I am sure.

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