Date: September 13 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
yo dawg that was cool, fun twist on the ending as well
Date: September 12 2013 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this story so much, at the end i was saying pick me i'm fathful
i would have liked to have the story filled out more, examples
if he was an ex boy friend why didn't he know who she was, and by the end did she tell him? how did she lure big red and shrink her, did she also play games with big red or just eat them both right away? i think there is alot more to this story and would really enjoy a rewrite of it, also i have some great ideas for a last chapter when she meets a good boyfriend finally
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a hot, hot, hot, HOT story, as in "very good even for Emma Gear's standards" imho
Date: September 12 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! this was a really wonderfuly wrote and creative story really flowed well and enjoyed reading it! Thank's for your work!
Date: September 12 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! this was a really wonderfuly wrote and creative story really flowed well and enjoyed reading it! Thank's for your work!