Date: January 05 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
That last line makes me wonder if Mark will try to hurt her. She isn't is a very telling choice of words where he could have said he is small and weak while she is huge and powerful.
Since Emily might shove him into places like her pussy, he could take advantange of being inside her and start breaking stuff. It'll be a sight if he kills or maims Emily.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad to see this story is back, I didn't review it last time, but it is definitely up there in quality. It is amazing how descriptive you can be with your writing, it's like I'm there seeing the whole thing happen. I really hope you continue this story!
Date: October 25 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really hope you'll continue this story , it's been a long time since you updated and I think it deserves more. Our heroes are probably screwed, Lauren seems to be unaware of all of this.
Date: July 25 2014 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Haha, your reply to my review stated that you would post the next chapter by tomorrow which means July 2nd. You must be busy at the moment. I hope you are continuing this story; You left me hanging after an incredicable chapter 16.
I hope you can come back soon. I cant wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh dear, what will Cheryl's mother do them? I can't imagine it would be anything good. I really missed this story, glad to see it is still alive!
Author's Response:
So far in the story, Abby for the most part has seen, and been part of, the real action. Things will change for Mark drastically soon...
[Report This]Date: December 12 2013 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Cherly is truly despicable, storing Abby in such a place, hopefully Lauren can right those wrongs! Your description of events is truly top notch and I hope this story doesn't end too soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks again Nostory! If my writing does end up waffling on, you must tell me otherwise I'll just end up writing more rubbish haha! Glad you're enjoying it so far, and don't worry! The story won't be ending any time soon!
[Report This]Date: December 06 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well at least it's over for night, pity Abby spends the night in Cheryl's mouth but I would not mind spending the night in her breasts, if I had a GTS girlfriend or wife I think I would spend all night there.
Date: November 23 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Incredible.... I love where this is going! Im curious... mark walked up to the stone in chapter 9 and almost touched it. Had he actually touched it, coulld he have shrunk again?? ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Who knows? The mystery of the stone is yet to be exposed!
[Report This]Date: November 22 2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your updates are pretty fast, so the delay was not noticed. I consider weekly updates to be fast.
Cheryl is really exploiting the situation, hopefully if Lauren finds out she is kinder to the couple. Abby is getting the brunt of it and I hope for her sakes that things get better. Great story so far so keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your constant reviews!
We'll have to see how Lauren behaves later in the story! Keep tuned and I hope to hear from you again soon!
Date: November 11 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is very entertaining! I wonder if this "stone" is powerful enough to cause a shrinking epidemic?.. :O
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks buddy!