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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

Nicely edited.  Much better, not that it was all that bad anyway, just trying to help you get better, ya know?

Well, looks like Lauren just walked into an emptie bedroom,...Hm, she can just climb in, get undressed, slide into that nice warm bed and get a good nights sleeep, huh?

Hide quick!  Here she comes!   aww, yes... nice!  ;`)

Two tinie's to play with for the giantess Lauren...



Author's Response:

Criticism is always welcomed! I can only get better when I'm told my faults, so thank you kind sir! I'm currently writing up my next chapter, literally as we speak so expect a new chapter hopefully within the hour!

And I may not meet your expectations or your predictions, but I do hope to exceed them!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

 I knew Abby should not have touched the stone!



Author's Response:

Are you enjoying the story? The reason it's taken me so long to update is because I wanted to figure out what and where I want the tale of our protagonists to go! I predict this will be a fairly long story but I want it to be consistently entertaining!

Thanks for reading my stories and keep in touch!

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