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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 18: Part I

It's amazing how many ways a mouth can be described!

So many details!

It makes me want to read the next chapter right now.

I'm assuming that there will be a part 2 with Cheryl, and then the following chapter will begin Emily's fun.

It's going to be a wild ride.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 18: Part I

I really like how you're writing this from a different characters perspective. It's brought new life in this story for me. At any rate I'm delighted to see this story back. You're one hell of a writer and I'm enjoying this story immensely.

aaron

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