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Reviewer: domainstyle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2023 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found/Shrunken Boy Meets Girl

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Reviewer: domainstyle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2022 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found/Shrunken Boy Meets Girl

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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 3: Dinner For Three

I've just completed your first three chapters, and for a first story, I'm quite impressed. It runs reasonably smooth, and has no glaring inadequacies. These are the things that usually stand out greatest. Spelling and grammar are well done, and I was able to enjoy the storyline without complaint. You have the makings of a fine writer ahead of you! Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I apologize for not seeing this review sooner but I was taking a break from this site. However I'm back now and I even made a new story if you want to take a look! 

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3: Dinner For Three

Of course there won't be any torture, you stated the story was PG rated. it'll be interesting to see where you take and I hope this isn't one of those stories that has the potential to go on ifinately because the author hasn't trought of where or how to end it.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 2: Starting From Scratch...Sort of

Ah, a much better chapter. Remember, each paragraph is supposed to hold only one idea. The only thing I object to in this chapter is the name Travis, but that's me being silly.

Here:

Until it dawned on me that she was tryinh out the new name I got.

You mean: trying

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2013 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found/Shrunken Boy Meets Girl

it's a good start, apart from you need to work on your paragraphing. And one detail is annoying me. I feel a (shrunken) human should be able to exit a standard rap trap (especially since it's described as bing "worn-out") because they have thumbs and are obviusly much smarter than a rat, not that a rat isn't smart. Rat are very smart. Although haven't seen a rap trap so I can't be certain that right. In my opinion, the only real way to find out is to scale one up ad put a human inside.

Reviewer: supernatural Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found/Shrunken Boy Meets Girl

Love it, just  work on thedescription a biti

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 2: Starting From Scratch...Sort of

Travis...hmm...ok fine. It's a nice story so far but there not much description. I know there's supposed to be a lot of emotion, but I'm not really feeling it (as much as I probably should).

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found/Shrunken Boy Meets Girl

I like start, although it shoudl have been a bit longer in my opinion. Also, remember to put the speech on separate lines to the description as it will make your story look neater.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2013 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 2: Starting From Scratch...Sort of

I like this story. The gentle giantess is my favorite kind. Will her mom or aunt be in the story at some point?

aaron

Author's Response: I'm not sure. The way I have the story going the story may just contain Lily, Jenna, and maybe The sisters' friends, but I might include a twist and add the mom at some point.

Reviewer: MyGoddessisSkyler Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2013 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found/Shrunken Boy Meets Girl

Esta muy bien solo espero que siga por el mismo camino , pues por una vez me gustaria una sencilla historia sin ninguna tiny tortura ni nada parecido sigue con ese punto maternal y no cambies el bonito sentido que esta cojiendo la historia


Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found/Shrunken Boy Meets Girl

continue this... Now.

Author's Response:

Just finished the second chapter and I'm working on the third. Is the story that good? Do you really like it that much?

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