Date: April 04 2020 7:29 PM Title: Introduction
Hey, I'm not sure what the best way to contact you is, so I'm leaving a comment on here and maybe you'll see it! If you do, feel free to email at, alittleexperience@hotmail.com and we can talk! I have an idea you might be interested in!
[Report This]Date: December 01 2017 7:47 PM Title: Introduction
Excellent story! It was both sexual and funny at the same time. I’m impressed how the story was well written. Ben and Miss Silva were amazing, especially when she used that pantie strapper on him. Again, most awesome work!
Date: March 03 2016 3:19 PM Title: Introduction
Can you please make another story? I love this story and I think another one similar to this would be good. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: December 11 2015 6:29 AM Title: Introduction
Encantadote,acabo de leer tu relato y me ha resultado genial, muy explicito e interesante, me encanta la dominacion femenina y los relatyos sobre ese tema y la insercion, la unica pega es que es un poco corto,me hubiese gustado que fuese un relato muy largo como Mi Matrimonio con una giganta,en todo caso mi enhorabuena y animo,espero leerte muy pronto
[Report This]Date: June 20 2014 7:32 AM Title: Introduction
I love this story and I keep checking back almost daily hoping you've written more. Hurry! I want to know what happens next!
[Report This]Date: April 08 2014 7:50 AM Title: Introduction
Cool update! This chapter was really sexy, and while its hard to not feel sorry for the little dude, a giantess teacher is awesome.
Author's Response: I completely agree Gadget! Being at the mercy of a sexy giantess teacher can be very sexy regardless of her cruelty.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 8:29 PM Title: Introduction
Good story, but why does the name "Phil" keep popping up?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review chocolatecheese! Well I write giantess stories on other websites and Phil was a name of another student who also had a giantess teacher. I am currently adding new chapters to both stories on both websites, so I get them mixed up often. Forgive me if you see Phil, or Ms. Prittey in this story becuase those two characters were in my other giantess story.
Date: February 21 2014 7:38 PM Title: Introduction
Good story. I love how he keeps pleasuring her all day. hope to see more of the same.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment Altos! I enjoy this story as well. Glad you are into it as I am.
Date: February 20 2014 8:32 PM Title: Introduction
It's like not too much happened in this chapter. I feel like some things could use more description, it kind of makes this story go by too quickly. I think this story works the best when there is a lot of dialogue bewtween the characters, especially Ben and Miss Silvia. Miss Silvia especially, is an interesting character, so whenever she has dialogue I'm hooked immediately.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review gadget! Yeah, I have been lacking my descriptiveness in my writing, but I hoped that I detailed the last foot scene pretty well to show that I am capable of describing a situation. I did use a lot of third person writing this chapter and I will put more dialogue in the future. Glad you enjoy Miss Silva's conversations!
[Report This]Date: February 16 2014 8:32 AM Title: Introduction
Yep I agree, :) The more descriptive you can be in a scene the larger your chapters will become and scenes will become longer making it easier to cap that 500word minimum and thus make chapters/scenes longer and easilly crush that feeling that you're moving too fast in your stories :D
I'm not much of a writer myself, (technically) but a tip from GTSwriter (who is an amazing Macrophile writer, if you haven't seen his work alreayd ^_^) is that the best way to enhance a story is to add points describing 5 senses around a character, what they can see, what they can feel (how it feels), descriptin of the sounds or noises they can hear from another large/small person or object, even focusing on smell and taste can be good methods to bump up your descriptive quota and possibly give readers a greater sense of immersion ^_^
That's the general tip he gave me anyway. I do find it makes writing some paragraphs easier when focusing on some of those points, so it could be worth a shot for you if you're willing to try out some different writing styles :)
Regardless, I look forward to your next update ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks for the tips Alman. Hopefully, you will see the improvements within my next few chapters.
Date: February 11 2014 5:08 PM Title: Introduction
Maybe not the best story ever but still great for your first one. I for one love this type of story. I cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Altos! I will continue to improve as I write more. More chapters will be coming soon.
Date: February 06 2014 1:32 AM Title: Introduction
I like this. Keep going, I can't wait for you to get better and see your writing style evolve over time. I think you're going to be an awesome writer.
Author's Response: Thanks Christiawi9! I agree. I hope my writing does get better, alteast through experience. Thanks for the comment! Stay tuned for the next chapter.
Date: January 30 2014 5:03 PM Title: Introduction
Yeah, first story's are really hard. Might I suggest the 'writing tools' section on this site, it gives alot of really helpful tips and guidelines that will help you out enormously!
Also,'ericafreak' has a very informative story called, 'A single authors thoughs on the writing process', it really helped me out alot....
*Just take your time, and have fun though... Don't try and outperform anybody, just write for your own enjoyment, and if you like it, maybe someone else will too.
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice midnightwriter, I will look into it.