Date: February 22 2020 9:20 AM Title: After School Tutoring.
Great story!
I really enjoyed the script between Ben and Miss Silva. She is very dominant and takes control of Ben for her own personal gain.
You're a good writer and should continue this story or even start a new one!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2016 4:19 AM Title: After School Tutoring.
I like the ide with the tape :-)
From your commenting of stories I know you have a lot of interesting ideas. So do you have any plans to write other stories? ;-)
Date: December 15 2015 6:10 AM Title: After School Tutoring.
principaldecirte que me parece un relato extraordinario y que lamento muchisimo que se haya acabado,creo que podria haber sido muchisimo mas largo,espero te animes a escribir otro parecido y muy largo
Date: May 16 2014 12:54 PM Title: After School Tutoring.
Is this story finished? you mentioned in a review you were going to add his perspective of this chapter but maybe that was anold response?
I've seen some of your work on writingg.com and you have some amazinfg chapters and ideas there. have you ever thought about transitioning them to giantess world. it's hard to find your work when it's scattered across different stories and all the pesky ads onthat site.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2014 5:38 PM Title: After School Tutoring.
Yes, good one.
Butt, it needs a little more descripton of Ben's experiences.
Author's Response: Nice mispelling on purpose. That was good. I knew I would read one eventually. Anyway, you make a good point SafetyPin! Most of my descriptions lacked Ben's perspective. I will adjust it for my next chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2014 9:54 AM Title: After School Tutoring.
My favorite chapter so far! from the previous chapters, I was surprised you wrote a chapter so cruel, detailed and anal oriented. Il ove how ms Silva is lovin it too. I cant wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you Mr. E! I have always enjoyed your stories escpecially "Shrunk near an MiLF" and "Hey, I warned you". So Im glad that you enjoyed this chapter and hopefully some future chapters as well. This particular chapter was based off a suggestion, and I tend to have a gentle approach followed by more crueler punishments. Cruel ones are usually more creative so I wont have that many in this story unless I get hit with another idea.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2014 2:27 AM Title: After School Tutoring.
A great story and a great chapter. I love all the ass stuff in this chapter. Thanks. Keep up the great work.
Dave
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment Dave! It seems that most people enjoy ass stuff too.
Date: April 07 2014 10:51 AM Title: After School Tutoring.
Incredible sexy thank for writting this!
Author's Response: No Problem Frollo. Also, thanks for reviewing and favoriting this story!
[Report This]Date: April 06 2014 9:31 PM Title: After School Tutoring.
Hole-ly Crap! I hope he gets outta there before it's too late! Ha! Naw, just kiddding! She should just keep him in there for the rest of the day...
Nice work !
-one bit of critique though. Stop repeating 'Miss Silva's' name, everytime you begin a sentence. You could just say 'Her', or 'She' instead. The reader already knows who you're reffering to, and you don't need to keep repeating 'Miss Silva' all the time...
Other than that, Great Chapter Tom!
Author's Response: Thanks Midnight! You make a very valid point. I used Miss Silva's name 71 times in this chapter! I fixed it and replaced a few of them with some pronouns. Now there are only 45 'Miss Silvas' in it.