Date: May 16 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 4: Woops, I guess this is the chapter with the changing room
you were clear. i know you had more to post but I wish you werent finished so you could keep adding more ideas to the story even though they werent posted yet.
if you want to meet on the egiantess chat for ideas pick a time.
Author's Response:
Oh! Now i understand. But no worries! This is a very... i guess a good word would be loose, story. There realy isn't a set plot line that i need to follow, so i can add things pretty much anywhere. Like a couple comments ago someone mentioned getting eaten by a bird. It was no challenge to put that in at all.
[Report This]Date: May 14 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 4: Woops, I guess this is the chapter with the changing room
WHAT! you finished it! this story has so much potential! do you need ideas? because i can give you some and I know there are tons of other reviewers who have requests too.
This chapter was cool because what voyeur doesnt like a changing room scene. I was surprised he he survived ashleys boot so easily but i guess Carlys stomp made up for it.
Author's Response:
Oh, did i not make it clear? I finished writting it, but i still need to post a bunch. So far, this is less than half.Still, if you have any sugestions, shoot.
You know this was actualy the first time i ever wrote a changing room scene? When i was writting the story, I wasn't even planning on putting it in. It just kinda popped into my head midway through the chapter. Worked out well though.