Reviewer: mikey31 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Getting Wet

Both stories are excellent and well-written.  I especially like the Tina/Suzanne route, as I like the sexual nature of it.  I like the whole revenge theme where Tina is his ex and he dumped her, and now Sam is helpless in her possession.

I'm excited about Suzanne coming over to Tina's--it's the best thing that could happen to the reader. :)  All I can think about is how awesome Sam's last encounter with Suzanne was--down on the the board game, and then he's dwarfed between her pink socks, and she smiles down at him.  Awesome!  There's so much potential in this Tina/Suzanne/Sam threesome.  And it need not just be physical.  I really enjoy the dialogue you write, emphaszing their size and power differences--like Suzanne did simply by standing over Sam.  Btw, I just started reading this story a few days ago.

If you're unsure of what to write... a creative game played by the three of them is a possibility--but write whatever you want.  Really enjoying it.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the feedback, I'm glad you like it :D

Yes I myself like those parts too! (the ones that imply just how small Sam really is compared to them)

I encourage you t read my other story as well (tough it's not finished) if you enjoy a more violent theme.

A game sounds like fun, I'll certainly consider it if it fits well in the story, thanks!