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Reviewer: SmolCrowing Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2021 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 6: Night Concert

Very nice work 

Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: An Ideal View

Idid'nt like the story you made the people to small and to many why have them in the story it read like her buy her self and of coarse  the lotion  

Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: An Ideal View

I am not into futa, but this was damn well enjoyable. Your writing skill is top notch and the level of detail put into the scenes were very well written. I am also a huge fan of micro so that is another reason that I love this story. I am glad i gave this story a chance. 

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: An Ideal View

I personally like the micro range. Haven't seen you write much about vore in their sex games. That would be very interesting.

I think it would be fun to have more 1 on 1 with the micro people as well. Humiliation and degredation on a more personal level is always something many look forward to in stories.

Otherwise, excellent excellent job!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 6: Night Concert

Great detail. Rin and Ayako sure are able to think up some kinky games.

Perhaps in one of the future chapters have them playing with humans a bit bigger than the micro range? Maybe 2 or 3 inches?

Reviewer: BillMann Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: An Ideal View

Thanks for the comments everyone. I am glad you like it so much Jim, I'll try to keep things going strong with this story.

 

I appreciate the review Ifc, I've enjoyed reading Theophobia, so I'm thankful for the commentary.

Next chapter should be done pretty soon.

 

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: An Ideal View

Don't really have anything more to say than I am continueing to enjoy this story. Just feel like this needs more reviews, so here I am!

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: An Ideal View

Just popping in to give this a five star. Us entertaining-story writers don't get enough love!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 3: A Gentle Awakening

Love it.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: An Ideal View

I, for one, can say that I enjoyed that.

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: An Ideal View

Interested to see where this goes.

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