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Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 27 2014 10:09 PM Title: The test

It's very unclear when the shrinking actually takes place here or what causes the shrinking to occur. Given the scientific environment, I assume it would be chemical related.

Being restricted to only one character's perspective could possibly smother a lot of their potential for individual development.

Don't mind me too much, looks like the story is moving at an entertaining pace! :]

Author's Response: Glad to hear you think so. I have been known for rushing a few stories in the past.

Author's Response: Glad to hear you think so. I have been known for rushing a few stories in the past.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 23 2014 12:54 PM Title: The test

Nice!

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