Reviews For Cysh's Boredom
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Reviewer: Haloichigo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I found this to be very entertaining. i am a sucker for giga sized giantess and having a giantess of this scale pulled me right in to read what this giantess would do. I love all the destruction she caused and the spitting was an amazing touch to her already great rampage.

Reviewer: sporadicx Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2015 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please write a second part!

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, just search for the word after you've done with the story, and then fix it, like replacing "Cysh would be standing" with "Cysh stood". Nice and clean.

But otherwise, I'll definitely read your stories in the future. :)

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice story! But I do have to criticeze you a little here for the constant shift in tenses, it is really confusing. For eaxmple:

"Cysh would be standing on the other side of the bridge now..."

And a couple of sentences later:

"Smirking she took one step onto the bridge..."

You either do one, or the other, but not both!



Author's Response:

Something I am working on. Also think this has become better in newer stories since somebody mentioned it before.

I also stopped my constant use of the word "would". Which is probably what caused it. A bad habit I had in the beginning.

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