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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

I really liked the weird tf plot points you added in this chapter. I rarely read somthing as strage as this but strage is good. I also liked the ass parts. its still fast paced but i can keep up easily and thats good.



Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews. I really appreciate the feedback and I'm trying to apply them into future chapters

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