[Report This]Date: August 15 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 8: Friends in Low Places
I'm fine with the subject... I meant that I can't wait for the next one. What I meant was there was not too much info in the story. it was just that a scientist took samples from Carly and Carly spoilt it. Well, thats how I felt when I read it the first time. Good job though. Seems like you want this story (Blackmail 5) to be long too. You Suspended the story at the right point. Lol (^.^) 10 is the highest rating right?
Author's Response:
Individual chapters of the story don't often have a lot of plot motion on their own. Like the earlier ones in the series, it's really about interaction with the characters. In this case, Carly trying to show her dominance still. Hence why I wondered if it's not suited to you, since that's really how all the stories have been.
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 8: Friends in Low Places
I get the feeling Carly will regret doing that.
Author's Response: ...probably an accurate feeling.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 8: Friends in Low Places
Good stuff, I expect Michelle will be briefed on how Carly likes her toes painted when this horrible nightmare is over.
Author's Response: Certainly Carly will be looking for some kind of retribution here, if the opportunity arises.
[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: Friends in Low Places
Well... not impressed that much... I can see you are trying toinuh alternate the scenes... This part was necessary though. Seems like the main part is towards the end. I want to know about Jack.
Author's Response: Well, the story is about both Jack and Carly, and it's mostly focused on Jack up to now, so I don't really know what to say. Maybe the subject matter isn't suited to you.