Date: August 20 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
Well written story. I've been hoping Carly would finally get a taste of her own medicine being humiliated at the feet of one of the other female Giantesses....
Author's Response:
Thanks! We may well see that exact act take place in a chapter soon.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
I was just thinking, you could have made Jack struggle more... "Rigid as you are already, you let her do it without rebellion.“Please,” you beg quietly, already grasping the inevitable but trying regardless to salvage what remains of your dignity. Yourown physical resistance wasn’t even enough. This is all you’ve got left. “Pleasedon’t make me do this.” After this, Jack could have knelt down beside the couch, holding Carly's feet, begged for 'mercy'. He would then break out in tears and grip the couch. Then Carly would console him wiping his face with her feet.!!! Just a thought.... and tjen the story continues as it you have written it.
Author's Response:
Certainly it's an image that would fit in with the story. Ultimately though there are probably infinite things I could add to the action and still have it fit in, but the chapters would get unmanageably long if I did that.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
Great stuff!!! Feel a little sad its just a dream. But its not bad. You even rhymed in a few places. 10 means the highest rating.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Dreams have a large role in this story, though sooner or later it may not just be the character's imagination...
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
The plot thickens and our heroine is redeemed!
Author's Response:
...in the moistest way possible.
Date: August 17 2015 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
You've got me itching for more.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Glad to hear! Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 9: Just a Little Foot Rub
When it comes to sensually describing toe jobs I think you may have surpasses Cayce in my opinion.
This was definitely a chapter for me and it absolutely did not disappoint.
Although Dr. Felton seems as professional as all get out(partly why I like her character so much) I would like to see him(can't believe I forgot the protag's name) display signs of transference or displacement(can't remember the correct term). I learned about this from years of watching Fraser hahaha(still makes me feel smart to watch it). But I obviously have no idea what you have planned for your story but if the good doctor has a larger role then I'd like to see him start to have feelings for her but she will still try and keep things professional because she wants to help him. I just think that that would be a neat side story to have and maybe her having feelings toward him as well(subconsciously of course).
Anyways, sorry to go off on some weird tangent. I like this story and I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's definitely high praise. Interesting thought about Dr. Felton. That's not really the direction things are going with her (she's really there more to help the protagonist root through his mind) - that, and there's probably a fifteen year age difference between the two of them. Nevertheless I hope you like what's to come. The thought of displacement isn't terribly far off, either...